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Tђз·GђФsт 07-16-04 09:19 PM

New Kat (spit'n Fiya Boi)**
 
Check it, dis my first Drop on dis site,
I get hate'n on, on another site, so i hope ya aint the same way
a Real dawg, is a real dawg, so...be real dawg.


you gunna be a ~Craig DaviD Look Alike~, the way you ~Walkin Away~/
~Discussin~ male booty's ya Hobby, ya need to quit ~Talkin so Gay~/
i must have ~Placed a penny~ in your ~Head~ cuz you to ~Sent-a-mental~/
BITE ME, this ~collision~ wont be ~covered~ like if i ~Bent-your-dental~/
i'll ~Break You~ till you CrumbeliN like a Scare-crow, dis the ~Last-Straw~/
last-flaw, im still a LIVE Animal, ya aint Freez'n Shit, cuz im ~PaSt-RaW~/
it's like ~Pushing Frankinstein~ out a Window, you gunna ~Freak-OUT~/
i'll Rip out your tounge, an ask "how you making Noise" wit dat Weak-Shout/

Thats ASS... See Im like diarrhea, and aint ~SHIT GUNNA STOP ME~/
Your Verses are like THROW-Up,& im to smooth when you Spit-all-Choppy/
like Having Sex in the Beggining of the Line, you ~FuK'n'Front~/
you Dirty Dawg, like a Used Duch Bag, like all you can do is Suk-a-Cunt/



Aight, that's jus a QUICK KEYSTYLE, jus wanted to get my first
Drop down! GeT @ Me

Tђз·GђФsт 07-16-04 11:29 PM

Uppping My Shit..DAMN

Tђз·GђФsт 07-17-04 12:59 AM

Come on yo 3 Hours an NOT 1 Drop of Feed?
I thought this site was supposed to be good on that shit?
Hmm, quick to prove me wrong

Tђз·GђФsт 07-17-04 05:14 PM

OmFg, Why did i even spit dis fo you people, When you aint even view'd it?

Mannnn.This site.....

E Looch 07-17-04 05:28 PM

ya rainbow font needs to go awayshit is annoyin to read why u aint gettin no feedback

seeu tried for some creativitie and wordplay didnt really feal any of it

rhyme scheme was nice flow was decent

not that good of an open mic though just elevate an work on some better wordplay and drop that color font shit

God 07-17-04 05:32 PM

it was pretty decent but i really didnt like that rainbow color crap...

but it was pretty decent please hit up one of my open mics

raw killa 07-17-04 05:33 PM

i agree da rainbow colors questions ur manhood kind fruity lkike tucan sam n shit word play was nit sum decent punches i aint keep practicin n peep my 2 drops holla back n continue doin ya hting peace


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