Biggie_XL vs Sniper
 

you no the rule 10-15 line your first
do what you do

can it be 16 so its all evan out.......................

check in .................................................. ..........

nigga you probabaly prewrote the shitr and it sixteen but ok you got it

aiiyo this bitch sniper better wtach wat he's doing
cuz when he stuck in my croohairs he better not be screwing
cuz 1 shot u'll be dead they call that shit a Headshot
and shit ill nick name that a fucking dead shot
cuz you think you can battle with Biggie thats already lie
and not this bitch better watch it cuz know he better be ready 2 die
cuz for this fool i wont evan put up ma defence
cuz ill spit this shit that so fucking intense
if i were 2 stop now id leave y'all in suspence
you call yourself snipa you couldn't hit me direct wit led
now back down cuz you know you be bitchem about tha shit said
know you beter watch i know you will cuz ya names sinper
let me she ya girl cuz i wanna make tha bitch hypur
ill eat ya bitch out like a ripe orange
you don;t like bitch, ill beat you wit a doorhinge
so befor i make tha lights flash befor ya eyes
let see how much it takes to make ya demise

oh that was 17 oh no you broke the rules bad boy and it ain't even oh no lol
i'll spit tomorrow i'm sleeping

Sniper, Ur kinda dumb, its uneven if he comes wit only 15 lines. think about. there are 2 lines in each bar, no 1. 15 is an odd number as to were 2 is even. Use math, division would help. oh, and all that garbage could not have been prewritten. so If u cant actually come harder then XL, then go ahead and DQ him. only pussies Use excuses like that to get a win. Spit on em kid. U aint a pussy right.

I WIN DEFAULT HE SAID YOU THE RULES AND THA RULES ARE NOT d/R NOP CREW NO HATE VOTES AND SIPT 20 OR 30 MINUTES AFTER CHECKIN HE TOOK TO LONG

/\/\/\/\ You Know Tha Rules***************.............. That What I Meant

what you talking about i never set a due date and plus you went of the line limit.
but i'll go now

you only xl? oh great now i'm battling short niggas//
your guns al on safty cuz ain't nothing happen when he pull the triggas//
you try to get a phone number but girls only give you one diget (middle finger)//
this kid calling himself biggie but he really a midget//
my words will have you crumbling worst than a bag of ritz (the crackers)//
i scary you and out come an afro that bigger than lenny kravets//
i got the skills that will make you retire like j-zay//
i so good why should i freestyle you should have to pay me//
i'm end your career/ once and for all right here//
you lose and you don't even com near//

uppin some votes hurr .................................................. ........

close both came weak but i liked the lenny line and the flow and style was good so i going with Sniper

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uppin i got one win look for another.

XL
aiiyo this bitch sniper better wtach wat he's doing
cuz when he stuck in my croohairs he better not be screwing
not a punch... and doesnt really make sense
cuz 1 shot u'll be dead they call that shit a Headshot
and shit ill nick name that a fucking dead shot
Umm pretty weak.. wtf wheres the punch..
cuz you think you can battle with Biggie thats already lie
and not this bitch better watch it cuz know he better be ready 2 die
not bad.. but not good...
cuz for this fool i wont evan put up ma defence
cuz ill spit this shit that so fucking intense
if i were 2 stop now id leave y'all in suspence
where r the punches..
you call yourself snipa you couldn't hit me direct wit led
now back down cuz you know you be bitchem about tha shit said
not a punch.. pretty damn weak if you think its a punch
know you beter watch i know you will cuz ya names sinper
let me she ya girl cuz i wanna make tha bitch hypur
not a punch either.. god this was pretty wack..
ill eat ya bitch out like a ripe orange
you don;t like bitch, ill beat you wit a doorhinge
pretty wack..pick a better word then orange.. and no punch
so befor i make tha lights flash befor ya eyes
let see how much it takes to make ya demise
no punch.. geeze you had all of one punch in this whole verse.. and it wasnt even good...

Sniper

you only xl? oh great now i'm battling short niggas//
your guns al on safty cuz ain't nothing happen when he pull the triggas//
not bad.. better then Biggies...
you try to get a phone number but girls only give you one diget (middle finger)//
this kid calling himself biggie but he really a midget//
meh not too good..
my words will have you crumbling worst than a bag of ritz (the crackers)//
i scary you and out come an afro that bigger than lenny kravets//
haha i dunt really see a punch.. but fix that up n itll be better
i got the skills that will make you retire like j-zay//
i so good why should i freestyle you should have to pay me//
Its okay.. but no real punch..
i'm end your career/ once and for all right here//
you lose and you don't even com near//
nothin special..could be better...

Overall sniper gets this battle.. he had some punches atlease..