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3rd-Shift 07-17-04 04:20 AM

Locked Up-mic wrecker verses makin a buzz 101
 
i neva been locked up neva did no time//
so i'll neva throw a criminal emphasis into my rhymes//
but i'll empy a clip b4 i become state property//
locked up in a box wit my mind b'n my only company//
every which way u turn a nigga schemin ya death//
all because they heard a 5 minute spit of mine that hit em direct//
didnt like what i spit, cant stand what i say//
now a niggaz exchangin faggots for pay to murk me with a blade//
this is how i am, my style is gonna die wit me//
pollutin these air waves is the only way i'll b a menace to society//
an ignorant nigga mite say aint no hood in this bitch//
nah pussy im just not givin my enemies weapons to destroy me wit//
i'll do an oj stiff arm on the law b4 doin a bid//
caz the only bars i wanna c is the ones that's made from a pen//
id rather spend bail money on jewles an benzes an rollz//
than b restriced to a 4 by 8 cell wit orange clothes//
that's just the way i c it, but i respect the struggle//
caz sometimes da law just wanna get somethin from yu//
but fuck goin in a box jus to rehab me//
im innocent plus i aint got no time to PAY my DEBT to society//

villagepimp 07-17-04 04:52 AM

I like that shit... Man... I thought it was tight...

That last line is my fave... I'll have to hit you up for my CD dawg.

Peace

3rd-Shift 07-18-04 01:28 AM

uppin 4 dat guud feedback ppl dont sleep on da flow

SLUGGA 07-18-04 01:44 AM

Yea I Feel Dat I Think Dat
Was Some Real Shit
And U Didnt Come Phony

And Check My Open Mic

KillaCamFlow 07-18-04 01:54 AM

Yo i can not lie..that was some deep as shit...iight...nice shit/....i liked the opener..it was pretty strong..if you ...""Ghetto"or knwo the struggle...you know wat he trying to tell...you can get the point of it

3rd-Shift 07-18-04 02:11 AM

uppin for more positive feedback, imma show u niggaz how to make a buzz on this site
check out that why to that shit hott

3rd-Shift 07-20-04 12:34 AM

uppin for open mic for july gotta c the skill ppl

Mad Dog 07-20-04 03:54 AM

Yo mic, as D2R's co-general, that was sum hott fya there dawg fo sho i dunno why u left the crew u could've stayed but wit a verse like that, u gots no problems gettin into crews dawg u jus showed ur true potential in that spit my fav line...

id rather spend bail money on jewles an benzes an rollz//
than b restriced to a 4 by 8 cell wit orange clothes//

/\ word lol nice there keep it up D2R still watchin ya :thumbup:

3rd-Shift 07-20-04 10:19 AM

yup, uppin 4 moe feed back


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