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ayt im new here so dont hate or make fun besides i probly got more skill than ya school english teacher at this shit......oh n so u niggaz n niggets kno my real name is allik war dis jus my flip side...hahahahahahaaa


by allik war:

yo its allik war,time 2 spit sum metaphors,4 da fans who wantin me more,than wut n e rapper could afford//im nasty i might fuck in truck,for a couple of bucks,n kick a whore out as soon as i bust//trust dis u dont want no part in dis,im an artist,slash arcinist burnin ur house down while ur shoppin at toys r us//im sick n twisted,like da bottle of cris i pissed in,im back again//fuck da law,ill cram my cock in da govenor's jaw,get her high from da crack in her drawer's//go public,tell da bitch 2 open my profit,b4 i stab her in da arm pits//
fuckin wit me,will have u stuck in da middle like 3's company,cuz im da newest mc,n im attackin ur children like flees,n bees stingin dey eye balls til they swell beggin 2 breath//u couldnt see me,cuz im jus a gust of vapor caught in da breeze,tellin ur mother get on her knees//im blowin up spots like dalmations,fuck up ur whole crews relations,n convence 2 masturbation//
sick rhyme,from my fucked up mind,every time,i grip a mic dat send chills down ya neck breakin ya spine//2 egotistic,2 b fuck wit,stubbern bitch,wit plans 2 get pussy n become rich//lyrics deeply inbeded in my flows,get even da most stuck up hoes,suckin my toes//watch out 4 a murder,cuz im comin through ur stereo 2 burgularize ur house n killin u,muthafuckas like where does he brew dis shit up from,i answer back wit a gallon of cum,taste da new flavor n peep where its comin from//i stay on top of da flow like dish washer
liquid,niggaz wish they could perfect my method,but i aint da nigga 2 b tested,cuz i dont give a fuck if i get arested,cuz cops can get it 2 i jus thought i would mention,so b smart dont tlk n maybe u'll enjoy ur pension//

i feel that verse..but it dont shake me at all.....hehe...i'll still whoop u in a battle..trust me boo....love ya....
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1 word for ya boo amature....lmmaoo love ya boo in ya dreams only ma

lol....ima smack down ya horn...if u get what i mean...the day is about to come....then you gon lick my feet.....lol.....

wut does a guy gotta do 2 recieve feed back i see peeps readin it but no replies shit i aint weak i can take constructive criticizim shit hit me up rate me sum 1 fuck thanx

stop turning this into a sex chat room wit Miss. Cleo and put it up on Ur sig as a link then battle people. slowly they'll come and check it out. U should work on Ur structure and metaphore, vocab, and pun...... fuck it, do the whole thing over actually. no beef just my opinion.

dats pretty funny thanx for da constructive criticism but i dont need dont hate u wish u were as good as me dats a weak flow n e ways i got my verse 2 da battle up now we wait 4 votes n i aint makin dis a blind date love column so dont b jeolous i got sum n u dont no beef its jus music oh bout da link shit how da fuck u do it? help me since u wanna b so hint of n constructive wit criticism thanx peace out 1

ayt people i respond 2 ya'll shit show sum respect n drop me a lin shit so many peeps peep it but dont say nuttin un cramp ur hands quit jackin of n write a message whether good or bad damn uppin up uppin up uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^c'mon^^^