Hard Times
 

MAN IM DEAD BROKE FUKIN WIT DISS GHETTO LIFE
CANT GO NO WHERE NIGGA WANNA B SHOOTIN AT NITE
SO I WATCH MY LIFE FLY BY JUST STARIN OUT A WINDOW
WAY 2 SIK AND TIRED OF PLAYIN DAT DAMN NINTENDO
OR PS2,XBOX DAT SAME SHIT
GIVE ME A BATTLE DAWG DA MONEY I NEED IT
BELIEVE IT NIGGA TRYIN ROB ME WHEN SELL BRIKS
SO SPIT AND NOT A FREESTYLE I MEAN BULLETS
AND DISS IS KAUSIN ME TO GO DOWN DA PATH A DEATH
IM GIVIN IT ALL I GOT BUT I AINT GOT NUTTIN LEFT
MY HARD TIMES IS BRINGIN ME DOWN WHERE I KANT GET UP
I SPIT KUZ DA FACT I HIT ROK BOTTOM MAKES ME WANNA GET UP
BUT DA STRUGGLE IS 2 HARD NOW IM IN A PRISON YARD
WAITIN 2 MY TIMES UP DAMN LIFE IS WAY 2 HARD :banghead:

pretty weak to me stayted on subject at hand but ya grammer is weak ya bars aint got nothin that stands out in em simple rhymes the scheme off it was lost more then kids on milkboxes

elevate 3/10

damn that was weak but what can i expect from a newb

it had weak flow... the structure was off at times..and the rhymes were pretty simple

overall weak .. but okay... please return the favor in a open mic in my sig