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marx 07-17-04 06:12 PM

marx vs lethalnjection
 
10-15 lines
fair honest voting
keep it original
first 2 5 votes win
i verse each

marx 07-17-04 06:15 PM

i set it up

u go first

God 07-17-04 06:21 PM

........................Check..................... ........

blind spit

God 07-17-04 06:42 PM

marx? Wanna battle, then he ‘next~to~die’, bullets will make his back ‘reject~his~spine’...
Slugs blast ya ‘chest~in~9’, my punches ‘wreck~your~rhyme’, serving you in 'seconds' like you 'next~in~line'
Even if you were the 'owner' of this site, your 'hip hop' will never get any 'air play'...
It’s like 'rudolph~vs~comet' in a 'deathmatch', but you're the one who gets 'sleighed' hahaha ...
Come in the battle like a 'fat man' bendin' over, and get 'r.i.pped~in~the~end'
even if you had a 'blood disease', you wouldn't be'sick~from~within'...
If you say you can beat me son, you lion(lyin'), go sit~in~the~den...and being lost in my 'sin' tences(sentences) is the only way you 'livin~in~sin'...
My spit and Marx are the droppin flames I deploy~in~stock!... Might as well turn this to 'Tetris' the way I'm bout' to destroy~your~block...
Dump cement on em' the way I flatten out and pave~this~fag....Put it to his dome cuzz all his spit says to me is that he craves~the~mag ...

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My old name

marx 07-17-04 06:47 PM

marx stays blazin ya, got him so shook mr njection comtemplating euthanasia
ill destroy ur whole city like a fucking holacaust
then split ur shit in two like ur folks filed 4 divorce
shots leave u holier than ur local pastor
u can't rap so im guessin u a beter actor

faggots like u usually get found 6 feet deeper than u are now
consider urself on bail i suggest dat u should leave town
lethalnjection spit pussy juice, i can't wait to see that he drown

when they cremate u ill pop shots at those that rate u
at the funeral aunties, uncles, nieces and nephews

u stay true to urself and remain a pacifist
wit ur dick in ur hand jackin off to a porno mag bitch

marx 07-17-04 06:52 PM

get sum honest votes in


lethalnjection obviously wrote his rhyme a long time ago

marx 07-17-04 07:20 PM

yo lets get sum votes going i want peoples honest opinions about how it went down!

Desipher 07-17-04 07:27 PM

i think lethal injection took this battle...u had some good punches marx but his wuz just better

miXed ToXinz 07-17-04 07:31 PM

this was 1 sided marx your shit str8 wack yo.. couldnt pick up the flow or somtin.. hit a few personals but your flow didnt com together..
Givin it to lethal even tho he probably pre-written his

$$ Money $$ 07-17-04 07:35 PM

lethalnjection pretty much killed it
punches,flow,personals etc
He took every category basically

God 07-17-04 08:29 PM

iight uppin and mix shut the fuk up.. its took me like 20 minutes to do that verse ..and i was rushed .. becuase i had to leave iight so stfu uppin for some more votes please

Tempa 07-17-04 08:36 PM

I ain't gonna hate on marx. You tried so it's all good. Lethal is just outta ya league...take yo ass to elevated nigga lol. Lethal had some nice punches, solid structucture, and some iight wordplay. Marx yo structure was iight though a few of ya lines was stretched. Work on lyrics and punches. Good luck in ya next battle.

Vote: LethalNJection

Recluse 07-17-04 08:43 PM

break down
opener:LethalNJection
punches:LethalNJection
flow:LethalNJection
wordplay:none
vocab:LethalNJection
structure:LethalNJection
personals:both
closer:LethalNJection
overall:LethalNJection

umm LethalNJection go tryout for <-Lyrical Virus-> just click the link in my sig

and another thing i'll finish my vote went i of you vote on the battle

its one of my weak ones but a newbie is a newbie lol

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135612


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