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Remember Me
I WANNA B REMEMBERED LIKE DA WATTS RIOT
LIKE RIDIN A BIKE OR SHOE WHEN U FIRST TIE IT ALL OVER DA NATION LIKE MARTIN HAVIN A DREAM OR WILT CHAMBERLAIN SCORIN A HUNDRED POINTS MAKIN DA CROWD SKREAM OR WUT ABOUT WHEN BIGGIE A TUPAC GOT SHOT DA SAME WIT JAM MASTER JAY AND SOULJA SLIM GOT POPPED I WANNA MAKE MYSELF A NAME CLIMB STAIRS OF FAME LEAVE DA MEMORY IN PEOPLES HEAD 2 PLAY OVER AGAIN KUZ JUST 2 BE 4GOTTEN WILL MAKE ME WANNA CRY SITTIN IN A DARK CORNER 4 ETERNITY ASKING Y |
that was weak and i really didnt like the color you were writing in..
it had some nice flow... the structure.. was off at times... but overall it was pretty weak |
ok, you could have put a tad more into this, but it was good for what it was, and i liked it, it didnt need complexity because it was how you felt at the time..and thats what matters....keep at it
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it was ok, content was aight, spelling and font..not so good
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