No Escape
 

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No escape, time gapes as I make a rhyme
Crystalized eyes percieve light from ancient times
Can't shine,
Photons richashe's my frame, degenerates, and dies,
it makes me cry
No escape from my black abyss
screams loud enough for sound waves to leave this black hole
from my fragile lips
Me... the heartless type
Every time I tried to wish upon a star it was a starless night
Poems display the madness
Imprisoned with in my own Deoxyribonucleic Acid ( DNA )
At the intersection of Purgatory, caught in the middle
Ambit of expressions, lost in the riddles
So a dusty Earth has me coughing a little
I might just die from my own breath, the air's poison
dryed out, i cry tears to moisten
A constant high pitch in sound
My atmosphere's so hot...
that my optic rain drops evaporate before they hit the ground
It just seems that my confusion only festers, no one relates
So this is why I feel no escape............................................ ....


Peace

wow, this piece was good, your wording, had a nice flow to it, real raw bro,, i liked the"starless night" line and the preceding line too, it was deep...nice...keep em comin

ay feelin this drop...it flowed nicely specially wit the words...very deep...keep dat shyt comin kidd

Spoken Word-Selection-(This for the Depress People) Feedback
 

You walk pass with a mask and it's tears you hide/
Livin life like it's iight but all ya did was lie/
Neglected and Rejected figurin out ways to die/
Depress and upset can I please ask why?/
Is the past hard to trash and a reason why you hate?/
Was you used and abused and probably even raped?/
Do ya parents fight at night and you can't even sleep
cause ya mom shoutin and screamin cause she gettin beat?/
Do ya feel defeated and cheated and everybody left you?/
Kicked on and Spit on and noone respect you?/
You feel lost and abandon like everybody hates you/
and Death feels like the best place to escape to/
But that's a lie, Satan puts in ya mind/
and he wants you in his hand at an early time/
Whether in troubles and struggles God can turn it around/
Even when ya handcuff in the ocean gettin ready to drown/
I know life seem impossible but ya gotta have faith/
Even when ya whole situation just seem out of place/
You been expose to hard blows you gotta hole in ya soul/
You try to fill the empty parts with sex, money and gold/
What's Prophets A Man To Gain The Whole Wide Earth/
And Lose His Soul In Hell Where He Burns And Thirst/
I had thoughts of my own slittin my wrist wit a knife/
and I prayed to God to take away my life/
I felt so worthless like a teen wit no purpose/
Gettin harass at laughed at like a clown in the circus/
I accept Christ in my life and it's my life he change/
He took my shame and pain and I neva been the same/
When you face troubles and struggles, it's for you to overcome it/
So get these lyrics in ya spirit til' it burns in ya stomach/
I pierce the gospel through ya heart wit full penetration/
And don't let Death find you like Final Destination!!/
Copyrighted@2003-written by Lyrical Artist
Fa Tha Soul Inc..Living Faith Christian Center..

Thanx ya'll.... and Lyrical Artist, please don't post poems in my thread, make your own.....

that poem is hot.....good work

Thanx Chick..lol