tourn vs. play-toh
 

2 lines
spit in 30 minutes
no hate
no crew
no dr
no bull people
reall votes
anything against this is a dq...

here it is people

he's a soft kat..even his name forces worldplay and he knows...
that i dont even have to try..to get two lines easily through play-toh

play-toh got nice word play and rhyming going on and tourn well its ok but could be better
vote: play-toh

ok.. play-toh.. first line was ok, second line.. i dunno what u were gettin at by sayin raps his faverout form (doesent relly make sence) losses come into his wackness didnt really make sense either, but i got what you were trying to say and it wasnt bad.

tourn, playin on playdough, got that from the word go, sort of a weak first line though, second line didnt have enough syllables.. and toh and knows doesent rhyme.. i think you underestimated the other kid in this and didnt try hard enough..

it was pretty weak overall from both textees.. but to tell the truth.. play-toh worked it a little better, less filler, and the end of each line rhymed better.
im gonna have to give this vote goin to play-toh.....

play-toh: your punchline was good, i liked the rhymes u did and i likes the wordplay
tourn:yours was alright but it was jus plain and simple

v/play-toh

do me a favour and return an honost vote on my battles that arein my sig

I think play-toh really needs to pay more attention to the words he uses. He rhymes, but doesn't make much sence. His "dissing" wasn't much.

vote: play-thou

he was more creative and tryed at a direct hit while the other guy aint come at as at him as he should plus play thou tryed to use multis which wasnt that bad
point blank: i thought play thou 1 bar was better

... and tourn needs some work too, but I feel he has the battle this time.

i vote play-toh for killer multiz
and jus an overall better punch

vote-playtoh