Battle: DaReTuRn vs intensify effect
 

Yo sup man
8-12 lines
due by 11 tonight
no D/R, crew, or hate votes. Explain votes to
Good luck!

yo ill shove a gun in your grill and pull the trigger
couting the teath as they fall i become a ditch digger
stomping his face till my forces are covered in blood
the effect of his wounds are causing the ditch to flood
filling in the whole with this intensity i hold in my hand
this nigga would be the first to leave in making the band
hes 21 probably one of the oldest on this site right now
you need a new hobby and while your at it shave the unibrow
by the way your av looks like a stripper, so heres a dollar bill
oh yea now that im done kicking your ass ill give you a pain pill

with 14 minutes to spare are you going to drop or what or is this going to be a no show.

ill give you some more time i guess man

dude how long does it take u to write ur shit man comon damn

well i guess u aint going to lay down so this is a no show lets get this closed

aight aight.... here is something quick since i found this still open when i went check'in my battle records......

u came with no evil purpose, i'll decease this herb shit....
its like im sharin my head with this bitch the way i bring hes "knees to the surface".... *ha*
i can change my Front to Cap-Lock.. the Mac-Cocked....
im delievring "white heads" on this homo... like im cloning Mat-Lock... *ha get it?*
Even if u Packed with Glocks.. u still couldnt spit hard... so drop that shit u brought....
cuz if i wanted to be generous... i'll put the "Gat to u'r for-head" to bring out them "hot-thoughts"....
fuck, u wouldnt even be told u'r out.... u'll get levft with da instruments 4 da band....
cuz ya "writes wack"..... oo now i'm starting to understand how u useing u'r hands.....
so look D, there aint no way voters u'll think u'r the right-one.....
cuz i got 99 verses N u still learning how to write-1...... EASY.....

BANG-BANG-EARLY........
YA HERD....

upp'in dont sleep on my verse ya'll................

upp'in for more votes people dont sleep on this battle........

close battle...intense had betta punches though...so he took it...

multis: ie
wordplay: ie
structure: dareturn
flow: dareturn
punches: ie

v/intensify effect

no need really to break it down much,
if the other dude dropped better punches he eaisly woulda won.
his structure and flow were way way way better then dudes.
advice to him work on them punches use some creativity.
and to intensify effect lose all the gay "" -3^*&*( bullshit.
takes away from your verse, ppl aint stupid.

but yea the closer won it in my oppinion.
it was the only thing i was feeling from either.

v/intensify effect

thanks for voting......
upp'in this battle.......

upp'in yet again..................................

this is still open WTF upp'in for a few more honest votes....

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