The Games Mine!! Freestyle
 

I'm The best and nobody fucking wit me\ I'll let off and make it look like red buttons on a white tee\ Tell a ho she's gotta have it to do the right thing like Spike Lee\I'll leave a nigga wet like he spilled his ice tea\ I keep a gun in both of my hands So nobody fight me\ I'm the greatest wit punchlines so call me the rap Ali\ My bars so sick my hooks infected wit HIV\ I'm going for Higher stakes\ I'm ahead in the rap game and the rest of ya'll niggas behind me like License Plates\ Coke tip the scales cause I'm buying weight\ Supplying states, everywhere I go I keep a slut date\ on the block I got blow like a ho on her payday\ I don't play games But I Smash Brothers like Mario Melee\ I'm a G so I ain't scared to leave a Baller missing like Bison Dele\ I'm a stunta so I'm Iceing Daily\ Might pipe ya lady\ use her mouth as a sitter and invite my babys\ I'm as real as it gets cause my life is crazy\ I play the corner hard like Champ Baley\ When I was born the lord made me to be a hot rapper, and any contender is ass\ for the money I push rock like Hov and Steve Nash\Nigga :shoot:

ok, first of all your structure was messed up dawg, next time try pressin enter instead of just typin your shit out in a paragraph form. you had some decent punches, the HIV line is kinda played, and u seemed to lose direction from you topic midway through the verse, but besides that it was fairly decent, i know you didnt ask for a scaled opinion but i'd give it a 7/10.

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:cussing: :gfy: I dont get it about that hiv shit and use her mouth as a sitter and invite my babys.what the mean of this cuse i dont understand it.