schema vs. Da Prodigy
 

10-12 lines
none of your silly shit voting
no noobs...50 posts and up
you got till 2008 to spit...take as much time as you think you need
prewrite...keystyle...go back and prewrite again whatever you wanna do

Bitch I Already Set It Up An The Rules/
Unlimited Lines/
U Spit First Sinced U Da Challenger/

And No Feedin Off Verses Or Other Battles

Getttin punched with the punchline uh leave ya nose broke/
Leave ya nose soaked u beatin me iz uh hoax/

Its not real bitch,yo flows imaginary/
yo rap game bout as real as the tooth fairy/
STYLE CHANGE

Yo/in ma closet dats where i keep ma gage/
but instead of bullets i load it with uh lyrical page/
2 beat this its gone take uh couple of days/
probably the amount between the arrival of J's/ (JORDANS)
like bitches wit aids/
ma flow uh give ya puub hairs uh fade/
cuz ma lines aint old but wise lika sage/
an ma flow an metas interweave like braids/
but u'll never get on ma level cuz u aint ma age/

So u might as well give it up cuz all ya metas iz 2 old/
Ma PUNCH-line count from 1 to 10 and always leave u K.O.ed

Explanation:
1.when i said J's i wuz sayin jordan shoes cuz it takes like a month 4 new ones 2 come out..
2.when i said "like bitches with AIDS/my shit uh give ya puub hairs uh fade..i wuz comparin how hot ma game iz and what the phrase is 4 females when they have aids..the phrase they use is "there burnin" if u didnt know that
3.a sage is someone who is old and respected 4 wisdom.i wuz comparin it with how ma flow iz respected/
4.when i said "so u might as well give it up cuz all ya metas 2 old/ma punchlines count from 1 to 10 and always leave u k.o.ed".i wuz connectin ma pinchlines with boxin and how when i say 1 to 10 punchlines u'll be k.o.ed just like how in boxin when they count from 1 to 10 ur k.o.ed

Ill Return Da Favor
When This Is Don
But Vote On
Slugga Vs Marx
Slugga Vs Hi-c

U Got 15 Mins 2 Turn In Yo Shit

this kid think he a genious so he just walk around hatin
he dont belong here yall just take a look at dogg's inspiration
dude needs a consolation prize...it hurts when you fail
"rook" i'll treat you like a "knight" and move you to your first "L"
yeah youre ill...your so wack you make my stomach upset
your battle stats was empty cause you aint confronted me yet
yo i aint tryin to make a 3 page battle so i just made an example
you do too much noob shit for words but here's the voters a sample
this kid's a herb a lot of ways but this here is the most
just cause the board is free he thinks it means to fuckin freepost
so go rally your whole herb army...i know you the boss
cause anybody that know shit is gonna see you got tossed

bitch shut the fuck up
act like im duckin you fuckin herb
it takes time to get all the linkes i used if i was gonna duck you i wouldnt have called you out

U Uh Bitch/
U Need Ta Calm Dat Shit Down

quit sleepin...anybody that votes ill vote on 2 of yours leave links ^uppin^

Da Prodigy:
Getttin punched with the punchline uh leave ya nose broke/
Leave ya nose soaked u beatin me iz uh hoax/
^nope...

Its not real bitch,yo flows imaginary/
yo rap game bout as real as the tooth fairy/
^played as hell...

Yo/in ma closet dats where i keep ma gage/
but instead of bullets i load it with uh lyrical page/
^filler...

2 beat this its gone take uh couple of days/
probably the amount between the arrival of J's/ (JORDANS)
^no...

like bitches wit aids/
ma flow uh give ya puub hairs uh fade/
^what happened to dissin ur opponent?

cuz ma lines aint old but wise lika sage/
an ma flow an metas interweave like braids/
^not dissin ur opponent

but u'll never get on ma level cuz u aint ma age/
^no...age has nothin to do with it..

So u might as well give it up cuz all ya metas iz 2 old/
Ma PUNCH-line count from 1 to 10 and always leave u K.O.ed
^no...

Schema:
this kid think he a genious so he just walk around hatin
he dont belong here yall just take a look at dogg's inspiration
^good punch...
dude needs a consolation prize...it hurts when you fail
"rook" i'll treat you like a "knight" and move you to your first "L"
^coo...worded horribly tho...

yeah youre ill...your so wack you make my stomach upset
your battle stats was empty cause you aint confronted me yet
^nah..not hard-hittin

yo i aint tryin to make a 3 page battle so i just made an example
you do too much noob shit for words but here's the voters a sample
^nah...ain't feelin it

this kid's a herb a lot of ways but this here is the most
just cause the board is free he thinks it means to fuckin freepost
^hehe...good one

so go rally your whole herb army...i know you the boss
cause anybody that know shit is gonna see you got tossed
^filler...

Overall: schema won this hands down. No further comments nedded. Prodigy...focus on dissin ur opponent more.


Feedback on this please:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135882

ayo, both uv yallz had good structure, n flow, ya rymez wuz both around tha same level, but wen schema rymed fail n L, thats wut got me, so yallz did a pritty dope job, but i just liked sum uv schema'z lines betta than prodigy

vote= schema

pleeze leeva a honest vote here: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135812
thanx, werd

^hit this up ill hit yours up everyones happy^

^upppin...im hungry for this ko^

prodigy sorry dawg but you dint have any personals,no punches that were decent at all,ryme scheme was koo,structure was good,but you dint seem like you were battlin..
schema:structure was good,had some good punches-overall you took this but you werent up against a mad diss....no hate jus my opinion,
vote/schema
hit these battles up honest votes only:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135134