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Street Legend vs. Killlah.......part 2
man.............i dont even give a fuck about rules man u keep tryna say im weak but im still beatin u mafucka..................
30 minute time limit after check 10 lines no crew dick ridin or hate votes man since im so weak u go first again........ |
checking in last time this nigga won on that bullshit but its all good
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yo check.......................
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Last time out this nigga was claimin this and that
Matta fact I had his ass shook from want to clap Suprised face to face you couldnt look in my eyes Head down low prayin to God askin- crying why oh why You lookin for me nigga you might wanna pass today Have ya bitch ass lost in ya words like Hanks on Castaway He claimin he on top like Mase and Brandy Not knowing Im up there just to lace his family Watch me nigga Im bout to get buck wild Fuck this freestyle bitch you just walked the Green Mile spit something bitch |
this is since im so weak..........
You should continue to battle newbs thats the only thing u do decent the column for ya loses are steadily increasin Ima lyrically demolish this foe, handlin all altercations Vivid words will cause penetration, havin ya heart wastin Im estimatin that at an approximation of one spit i will leave this guys verse with deterioration dawg you are humorusly overrated, constanly stimulated by feed back based on exaggerration Quote:
hot shit i spit man verbs are subliminal claimin i won my last battle against him on visual |
Nigga need proof to exlpain why he should win come on dog thats lame if you ill like that then you shouldnt have to
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man you just try ya hardest to sway for votes dont you.................
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Na I just feel there is a need for the people spit freestlye not do some lame shit like you wait 2 days and some change and then try and call me out nigga i done peeped ya game
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Killah- Wack sorry but true your verse was wack ok structure ok flow but wack punches not even one I saw personals really wack no metahs you talked about garbage nah it was horrible I didnt even enjoy it I give it a 3/10
SL- Ok it was average not the best and I know why( cuz you had no compettion) you had some punches good flow good structure some good personals I enjoyed yours alot more than killah I would give you an average of 6/10 So my vote has to go to street legend |
killlah :
Last time out this nigga was claimin this and that Matta fact I had his ass shook from want to clap ^from want to clap?...atleast it's a personal... Suprised face to face you couldnt look in my eyes Head down low prayin to God askin- crying why oh why ^weak... You lookin for me nigga you might wanna pass today Have ya bitch ass lost in ya words like Hanks on Castaway ^weak metaphor...think a lil' more He claimin he on top like Mase and Brandy Not knowing Im up there just to lace his family ^no... Watch me nigga Im bout to get buck wild Fuck this freestyle bitch you just walked the Green Mile ^no... Street Legend: You should continue to battle newbs thats the only thing u do decent the column for ya loses are steadily increasin ^no...atleast its a personal... Ima lyrically demolish this foe, handlin all altercations Vivid words will cause penetration, havin ya heart wastin ^no... Im estimatin that at an approximation of one spit i will leave this guys verse with deterioration ^no... dawg you are humorusly overrated, constanly stimulated by feed back based on exaggerration ^personal atleast...worded horribly...but its a personal hot shit i spit man verbs are subliminal claimin i won my last battle against him on visual ^no... Overall:...hmmmm...not the greatest battle to be honest. Killah...ur just makin obvious shit...you need to try and think of something fresh. The simple metaphor won't cut it. Street...your basically just usin good vocab for the sake of usin it... "Im estimatin that at an approximation" ^your sayin the same shit...pointless multies...you could of added sumthin else in there. But overall...der was only one line that actually wasn't a "no..." in this entire battle and that was posted by Street. So he gets my vote. /v- Street Legend Givin ya'll some real feedback. Take it any way you like, just tryin to help. Return the favour with honest votes plz. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135899 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135882 pz out. God Bless. - T-West. |
uppp...................
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punches - Street Legend
flow - tie creativity - Street Legend language - Street Legend structure - tie fun factor - Street Legend hand down v. Street Legend. |
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can we get some votes.........its a close battle(lmfao)
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LOL FUKKIN KILLAH U WACK NIGGA DAT WAS DA MOST basic verse i saw on here dunn damm man go watch freestyle friday or some shit so u could at least get a feel of battle rappin dunn ur ya verse had no punches,personals,creativity or nothin ....street ya first bars was fukked up ya first line was longer than ya second by alot of words nahmean u had some vocab i dotn really care 4 dat shit tho but at least ya verse had some creativity nahmean and a few punches
my vote-street VOTE ON WUN OF DEM BATTLES IN MY SIG.. |
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