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Hustler17 07-19-04 04:21 AM

Rhyme Sayer
 
I'm not just a rhyme sayer
I'm not just a time player
I ain't your average bitch
that makes your faces twitch
I'm not just a BS sayer
I'm not a dinner prayer
I ain't your little hoe
so I suggest you get up and go.
I'm not a cake layer
I'm definitly not your bill payer
I may not be the one for you
You may as well accept that we're through

Crossword 07-19-04 08:01 AM

ehhh, more of a really short open mic. But i guess i could see it as one of those accopella ones at a coffee house or something. Not too bad. 5/10

Hustler17 07-19-04 08:52 AM

its not open mic, its a poem

fluidmoon 07-19-04 04:20 PM

it was decent for what it was, it rhymed and shit, try to have more emotion in your words....keep it up


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