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SLUGGA 07-19-04 05:57 PM

Slugga Vs Willanova
 
Same Rules

SLUGGA 07-19-04 06:13 PM

Step Up
 
Is You Scared
Or Iz You Go Let Me Win By Dq
Cause You Dont Want To Be
Embarrased

WillNova 07-19-04 06:28 PM

Quit now, i told u before this is not fo lil kids//
Have u fuked harder than the smilies in ya sig//
open bids, I'm scared? who u gonna embarrase//
after u perish, display ya body on a carraige//
u less than average, battlin niggas outta proportion//
take baby steps, u moms should've got the abortion//
cause ya pops was snortin, that'll explain ya situation//
born a crack baby, being laughed at is ya destination//
no need fo explaination, jus rest a be rehabilitated//
and if u ain't toppin this, quit before ur humiliated//

WillNova 07-19-04 06:29 PM

aight nigga, that was sum quick quick.... jus go and do u

SLUGGA 07-19-04 07:00 PM

See U Want Win Jus Trust Me,
The Only Way If You Get Lucky/
And You Dont Get Girls Cause You To Ugly,
By The Way Tell Ya Mom To Stop Send Me Messages Sayin Fuck Me Fuck Me/
Cause I Dont Want Dat Bitch,
Unless She Go Suck Da Dick/
Oh Yeah Back To Da Gay Guy,
You Lost But Nice Try/
Even Though Ya Reply Took An Hour,
Still I Wasted Time Wit Dis Coward/

WillNova 07-19-04 07:04 PM

are u serious, I wrote mine in 'bout 10minutes, It took u about a hour, I went to the store and came back, smoked a black and u still ain't post no fire.... cum on lets get sum votes...... uppin fo sumthin

7*0*8* 07-19-04 07:08 PM

"u less than average, battlin niggas outta proportion//
take baby steps, u moms should've got the abortion//"

yo dat last line sorta reminds me of 8mile so it kinda made me lost interset in your verse sry... and i liked slugga betta cuz he had betta flow ad structure AND punches so he kinda one-sided ya on dis one .... no hatin dis ws an honest vote

vote/slugga

7*0*8* 07-19-04 07:09 PM

return da favor... i would prefer both of you even if you didn't like my vote....
plz return the favor.... nad vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135662

WillNova 07-19-04 07:10 PM

aight but I ain't never seen 8 mile in my life..... damn I gotta see that movie

Mc:Xplicit 07-19-04 07:10 PM

word up yo this battle was okay but i think willnova took it. Slugga tryed but it wasn't your best stuff today
punchies:will
personals:no one
multies:will
overall: will
nice try but i think willnova took it man
yo drop an honest vote on my battle man http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135995

SLUGGA 07-19-04 07:54 PM

Uppin 4 Votes Come
On
I Return Favors
Win Lose Or Draw

For$akeN 07-19-04 08:02 PM

SLUGGA: to be honest I wasn't liking your drop much at all............
flow was lacking but it went off at times in the battle which I wasn't
liking.....punches weren't that hard hitting but that's ok................
original was not there at all .................effectiveness
was you worst category as I said it didn't really hit him hard........
also you had no personals and thats a no-no that makes people
think its prewritten.....and tips......don't rhyme about his mother
because thats a played-ass concept seriously......................


WillNova: your verse to me only was just average not all special......
flow was there and the syllable count was good in counting.............
punches were ok but typing about parents and shit is not required
that fucks verses up...........seriously!........................... ...............
original was lacking aswell due to the parent concept........................
effectiveness was working for awhile but it all went downhill for a while..
personals none suspect of pre-written......................................


overall: due to much better flow and being tied in every other
category excluding punches..................so my vote goes to WillNova..

amayze 07-20-04 01:38 PM

i like both but wil had a nice lil personal flow 2 his
2 me sum of da stuff slugga was sayin was kinda off
but he made it work
overall: will

amayze vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

WillNova 07-21-04 08:19 PM

as always, very appreciative of the votes, jus keep them coming in.... uppin fo sumthing

~Luciano~ 07-25-04 02:52 PM

aight this battle was kinda tied but then again not

slugger you had some nice lil punches but there were basic as hell you need to elevate and use more meta's, the personals were ok if you wanna call em personals, ya structure was off that one line was wayyyyy 2 stretched so get that shit in check

will you had the overall better verse due to wordplay and complexity the punches were kinda weak and played but you won this due to good wordplay, ya structure was on point to
easy win

my vote= Willnova


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