ibraheem~vs~ 7*0*8*
 

like u said...
10 lines min.

no DR
i spit 1st as soon as u chec

huryy up cuz im sleepy

haha talking about sleepy its 5:10 am over here anyway checking in i will spit like 30min after u drop

yo you took your time man im going 2 sleep spit first thing tomorrow
peace

you lost your touch in rap like numbness
don't even rush/ nigga u know i won this
u outa luck nigga/ might as well lose you clover
you aint neva open/ so u cant think of a closer
its over/ so u might wana click to the other RB
they like you cause/they don't want a real emcee
u exposed when yo fear of me is comin out when u type
sweat all over ya cothes, sweatin can think of nothing 2 write
you must be on sumtin bein from London and rappin'
you soppose 2 be broadway producing and tappin'

ok good luck on yo verse man sry 4 da delay i was ain a accident but im kool now so spit yo verse and lets get ids battle open :thumbup:

You got me laughing your shit is basic and lame/
Why the fuck you chose your house number for a name/

I am at the airport now waiting for a plain to patch/
Fly it twice the speed of sound and crash it into your house/

Fuck that im send a virus by e-mail for you to catch/
Chemically melt down your talent and intellectual hatch/

Shit it aint working there is nothing to melt down/
Your head is fucking empty as a deserted ghost town/

You must’ve use a special fuel cause your punches never land/
With funny rhymes like that you might attract Disney land/

I will give an advice so you wont be in my debt/
Stop fucking rhyming your wasting kb at the net/

Overall An Ok Battle........but Mah Vote Goes To Ibraheem.......had Sum Better Punches.....708 Was Kinda Simple.......try Hittin Em Harder Next Time......more Personals

ibraheem gets my vote,

He had harder hitting punches, better wordplay and overall better structure and flow,
708 seemed real basic and had corny punches that i felt didnt even make a dent on the other verse

id have to agree, 708 u lost this 1,he had more rymes hitting harder then u and they made alot more sence

ibraheem won this from the start
first bar done it for me

You got me laughing your shit is basic and lame/
Why the fuck you chose your house number for a name/
.....thought that was funny as fuck........
ibraheem 7/10

708 you didnt really hit hard enough
best line
you must be on sumtin bein from London and rappin'
you soppose 2 be broadway producing and tappin'
was an ok personal but bar that you didnt come hard enough
708...5/10
vote...ibraheem

upping............................................ ...

ibraheem hittin much harder with his punches and real nice ill word play here. 708 I just wasn't feelin ya verse this time I had a hard time following the flow.

Vote: ibraheem

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votes please.

you lost your touch in rap like numbness
don't even rush/ nigga u know i won this
uh..no punch there
u outa luck nigga/ might as well lose you clover
you aint neva open/ so u cant think of a closer
whats a clover? second like was decent compared to ur other stuff but still weak
its over/ so u might wana click to the other RB
they like you cause/they don't want a real emcee
...yeah...they do..
u exposed when yo fear of me is comin out when u type
sweat all over ya cothes, sweatin can think of nothing 2 write
weak
you must be on sumtin bein from London and rappin'
you soppose 2 be broadway producing and tappin'
best line you had...still only decent

yo ibaheem took this no beef wit 708 good verse to boff
but ibraheem;s verse was more structured, but 708 had a better flow
but basically in the end i liked ibraheems verse
so vote:breem

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