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Makin a Buzz pt. 3 Warrior Pt. 3
he hails from a central location not the east or west//
north or the south but out the kid's mouth only flows out the best// mama raised him like her only son pops skipped town wen he was young// gods gotta bigga callin on him so wen he say shit u can count it done// the rulin's begun....u can tell that he's a cut above// he'd rather embarras you wit his words rather than push an shove// but if he gotta slap yu he gon catch you with that back hand// an pop ya face like a tab on a pepsi can// you dont understand.....shit aint a game nigga life is real// aint no foot or yardstick that can measure the length of his skill// so he keep spittin till the whole world no his name// MC with a hunger that wont stop till he eat his way up the food chain// fuck yu if u complain....caz his journey makes haters outta plain fools// who wuld collapse after takin 9 steps in his shoes// he's got nuttin to lose....send any rappa to his career's demise// caz his style is relentless spittin like its his only way to survive// either typin keys on RB or in the booth rhymin words// his style is fresh nothin that these stupid herbs neva heard// an thats fa sure....this warrior aint goin down without a fight// sincerly yours that nati nigga that completly wrecks mics............... |
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decent.... good flow... lines a tad stretched..
got ur point across well, the whole thing could use better wording. be more witty... elevate a little, but u'll get there. peep my shit i juss dropped |
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