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Play-toh vs. Mr.Washington
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yo yo yo Yo this guys back from the tea party like newage lesbians But trust me with your old age your takin the L train like lazy pedestrians... Never win take a wash, cause you ain't settin up this fight... kid you've gotta better chance of fitting into christinas tights... light beers Mr. no dubs grand drink of choice... but fuckhim his skills with text are as ligit as britneys voice... Never know who your against and then starts talking all trash.. This cats not hip hop too generic like a r&b singer... get outta MY HOUSE...i'll show you the way with my middle finger... :nono: :gfy: |
Hesistant to battle me at first, ya shook runnin tracks now...
& Ur ego's big, so ur heads blowing up n comin back down Ur bloods in the thread... like I killed u with a sowin machine kids so stupid.... ...thought i was talkin bout golf wen i sed blowin the green Ur content wit life... but u aint got no freinds so I'd complain + ur broke.... ...so lookin thru glass aint the only way u window shop in pain ya structures wack, and it's plain to see ya suck at rap... I'd dispose ya verse, but even the trash can would chuck it back! |
hahah recycled...can someone say prewritten...haha...i know your games kid...but thanks anyways...no personals...no personals!!!
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^ stop fuckin swaying you little baby. i fuckin keyed that in the fuckin time it says,
you dont know if i fuckin prewrote it, or just pulled it out of my ass, so shut the fuck up and stop swayin the voters fuckin newb. |
vote: Play-toh, cause Mr. Washinton pm'd me asking for me to peep. I don't care who won this toy battle... A front line text? Guy - you should know not to ask a all-audio head to vote for you. WACK.
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Play-toh
structure is decent...u did have a few stretched lines though...flow fell off a little bit...no good multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good peronals... Mr.Washington structure is good...flow is on target...u had one multi...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall neither had good personals...Mr.Washington had the better structure...the more stable flow...one more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mr.Washington gets my vote... VOTE - MR.WASHINGTON |
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wasn't a pm. but oh well.... we should battle audio to :thumbup: so i can make you look like a fool for that vote. :laugh: |
up as well....
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Ok this was a orite battle, Actually this is the best ive seen on the front lines lol
Yo this guys back from the tea party like newage lesbians But trust me with your old age your takin the L train like lazy pedestrians... Creative..but didnt really connect to hard..kinda streched 4.5/10 Never win take a wash, cause you ain't settin up this fight... kid you've gotta better chance of fitting into christinas tights... Weak..When i said the bar out loud it sounded kinda basic..3.5/10 light beers Mr. no dubs grand drink of choice... but fuckhim his skills with text are as ligit as britneys voice... Ok..Could ov been worded better though 4.5/10 Never know who your against and then starts talking all trash.. This cats not hip hop too generic like a r&b singer... get outta MY HOUSE...i'll show you the way with my middle finger... Went To cock there didnt it? 3 lines to finish not a good idea..plus there was no real punch in this at all..weak 3/10 Good: Flo was pretty consistent having a decent flow is the first step to elevation..although everyone knows rap is about rhyming lol Bad: lines were pretty stretched at times which effected the structure, u threw punches but they wasnt to effective..same goes with metas Hesistant to battle me at first, ya shook runnin tracks now... & Ur ego's big, so ur heads blowing up n comin back down Ok introduction to the verse..Coming out and saying ur going to puncture his ego..6/10 Ur bloods in the thread... like I killed u with a sowin machine kids so stupid.... ...thought i was talkin bout golf wen i sed blowin the green Nice..Liked the wordplay used here..but i bet some herbs wont understand this 8/10 Ur content wit life... but u aint got no freinds so I'd complain + ur broke.... ...so lookin thru glass aint the only way u window shop in pain Could ov kept the + ur broke out..but anyway wordplay was nice done again..props so far 7/10 ya structures wack, and it's plain to see ya suck at rap... I'd dispose ya verse, but even the trash can would chuck it back! Decent flip on his verse..creative and witty 7/10 I liked this verse, :) wordplay was nice when used, approiately flipping his verse for the closer, flow was ok..went off like once..perhaps the structure could be tweaked slightly though V/ Mr Washington..all round better verse..y'all peep my battle and drop a vote..no hate pz |
I felt that Mr Washington had an overall better verse..ya both need to elevate, but not a bad battle at all
V/Mr Washington |
upppn again.....
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Yeah I was feelin Mr Washingtons more den Plays. THough he didnt have any personals, he had good metas and wordplay in his. Play had a good verse too but Mr Washington takes it with metas, wordplay.
Vote-MrWashington Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
yo boff verses was hot but,
ima have to give it to Mr. Washington cause this line killed him -Hesistant to battle me at first, ya shook runnin tracks now... & Ur ego's big, so ur heads blowing up n comin back down i liked that line fasho! but yo return the favor delinquint vs. Optimal delinquint vs. NovaKane |
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