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Premanition(1-1) vs. GodsSon (1-1)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
checkin in...you can spit first if you like.
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aight here we go...
Yo check it, battlin this cat? why waste my time i hope its just a lie... ..........No way in hell this Kid is gonna be The best vet of July ... The only vet he'll be is the Vagrant Effete Thief... ..............This kid talks so much shit that hes got cavities in his teeth.. Whats all this shit about you being in the Spotlight??? ... ............Prem got mad and replied sayin Quote:
Rapbattles this is my experiment so whats ya hypothesis..?? ........Keep in mind he got raped and Ko'd by a cat named Apothesis style switch... I've got a Premanition its Ya Verse, Got Me Like A 2 By 4, I'm Bored....... .............Only Time You On Point Is When You Run Through My Sword// Knock And Flip,!! Prem is Handin Out BJ's So All He Can Come Spit Is Hair// ..............Witness Terror!! Cause Like Bustin Nuts On Fruits You Just Didn't Cum-Pear (compare) You'll get tossed-regardless I promise even if you drop-your-hardest// ..............Honestly I'll still set this herbicide (herb aside) like cautious-pharmiscists// Cause his bars-is-harmless although this "faggot" is sometimes-the-opposite// ..............This Fruit acts Rotten in hopes of having a Fungi(Fun Guy)-on-top-of-him// Please be sure to check all the links or else you wont get them..thanks *Vagrant- person with no home and no job. **Effete- weak *** Premanition- a feeling inside. |
'God's son'....jesus! shud you be cursin wen religion is ya culture...
12 lines maximum...or one bar with that stretched structure.... callin out newbs for fun, so you can say theres a battle u won… not in front lines son..so expect a completely different outcome… literally pissed my sides and followed through… ….wen I discovered ur number one album was ‘blueprint 2’…(link) got a premanition…n u have no hope in this competition…. Not a ‘feelin inside’ but a future vision…beta check ya definition…(above) I think its nice that you address ur mum as ‘christ’…(god’s son) But my friends laugh…wen I say I’ve fucked ‘god’ twice… Our mind state doesn’t compare in this lyrical affair…. cos my win was fair…while a no shows why you all square….(first battle) http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133158 uppin |
Ok NiCe Battle
GodSon-Structure as Fucked Yo verse Was Descent But Structure and Add More Punches... Premanition-Good Structure lol..Punches Connected Personals Came And Nice Drop Opener Yo check it, battlin this cat? why waste my time i hope its just a lie... ..........No way in hell this Kid is gonna be The best vet of July ... Okk 8/10 'God's son'....jesus! shud you be cursin wen religion is ya culture... 12 lines maximum...or one bar with that stretched structure.... 9.3/10 Closer Cause his bars-is-harmless although this "faggot" is sometimes-the-opposite// ..............This Fruit acts Rotten in hopes of having a Fungi(Fun Guy)-on-top-of-him// Not Good Rhyme Scheme 7/10 Our mind state doesn’t compare in this lyrical affair…. cos my win was fair…while a no shows why you all square…. 8/10 winner-Pre |
Punches-Tie
Personals-Preminition....but both had some good one's Multi's-Tie Flow-Tie Structure-Preminition Opener-Preminition Closer-Prem....God's son i liked the wordplay...but the rhyme scheme was off Wordplay-Gods Son Creativity-Tie Overall-Preminition...pretty good battle i felt it was close....God's Son u had some great wordplay and soem decent personals and punches...but i felt Prem's personals were better and he just up'd ya by a bit....good battle tho props |
Prem took this because he came more original. He came fairly strong, well strong enuff to beat god.
btw Hypothesis & Apotheosis dont rhyme properly. Ap Oh Thee Oh Sis Hi Poth Ah Sis but thanks for the mention :). God also had a lot of played lines.....such as... I've got a Premanition its Ya Verse, Got Me Like A 2 By 4, I'm Bored....... .............Only Time You On Point Is When You Run Through My Sword// Knock And Flip,!! Prem is Handin Out BJ's So All He Can Come Spit Is Hair// ..............Witness Terror!! Cause Like Bustin Nuts On Fruits You Just Didn't Cum-Pear (compare) You'll get tossed-regardless I promise even if you drop-your-hardest// ..............Honestly I'll still set this herbicide (herb aside) like cautious-pharmiscists// Point cum & herb lines are ALL played. This wasnt a bad line...pretty funny Cause his bars-is-harmless although this "faggot" is sometimes-the-opposite// ..............This Fruit acts Rotten in hopes of having a Fungi(Fun Guy)-on-top-of-him// Prem..... 'God's son'....jesus! shud you be cursin wen religion is ya culture... 12 lines maximum...or one bar with that stretched structure.... ^good. vote prem. |
damnnn this battle was ILL though. I was feelin both rhymes but Pre had better punches in there and the structure was GOOd. I didnt understand some of gods son's bars but they sounded ill. No beef
punches: tie Structure: prem Multis: tie Metas: tie FLow: prem Opener: prem Closer: prem Vote: Prem |
vote prem.
he just walked this battle wih such ease.. every section was dominated.. punches personals and flow.. pz. |
Yo i was feeling gods son's verse until you flipped your style up. i dont give a fuck about your structure, but it was fucked up, but your punches were weak in the second half.
Prem- good drop, couple spots were you could have been feeding possibly, but much better verse, solid punches. fav line of battle was-callin out newbs for fun, so you can say theres a battle u won… not in front lines son..so expect a completely different outcome… vote- premanition |
dope battle
Punches-Tie Personals-tie Multi's-gs Flow-Tie Structure-pre Opener-pre Closer-tie Wordplay-gs Creativity:tie 6-6.. overall ima give it to premanitation, appealed to memore.. v/prem |
godson
you actually had one of the best verses ive seen from you.. you didnt use links right though..u used them when they were unnesecary your punches hit hard and personals were good overall 7.9/10 premanation a nice strong verse for you..im actually not bored reading this..you kept me intrested at all tiimes by throwing in ahrd hitting peronals and punches that upstaged his nice verse and u beat him pretty cleanly..8.4/10 my vote: premenationnn |
Syrucuture:both
Personals: Pre Punches: both Creative pre Enjoyed; both vote: pre |
nice battle
punches: tie Structure: prem Multis: tie Metas: tie FLow: prem Opener: prem Closer: prem Vote: Prem |
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