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ooooweeeeeeeeeeh 07-20-04 05:57 AM

bitches
 
fuk u u slag (man slappin a women)

thts wat it feels like// everynite// if u had a women always wantin to fite//jus try n wlk away//jus leave her jus dn fite back till 1 day// she pisses u off// jus to fukin get off//n then end up slapped// her face marked blue n black// thts why im on this track//cos ive finally cracked// to the point thth if i go home to my women shes gonna get smacked// or wacked//im gonna kill her if she sez ne thing agen// im gonna kill her if she dont stop seeing them men//first thre was ben// now thre is len// fuck i forgot the other ten//i dont wanna hit no woman but this bitch// is eventually gonna end up in a ditch//

D-Tain 07-20-04 08:51 AM

not that good, structure was i little bad, and the rhymes were a bit weak, you could of used better rhymes. but nice try

ooooweeeeeeeeeeh 07-21-04 06:37 PM

safe man i no it wos shit i was tired man fanx for da info tho safe


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