Horizon vs Cerulean VOTE
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Horizon, eh...? You're title's apt cos you going down like the glum-evening-sun
And you're from Brixton UK as well? Fag's prolly just another bum-peeving scum Before you even started I'm sick of ya tale, your rhymes are whimsical and stale Tip the scale with your own entrails, mail 'em back in a bag when I gag ya pitiful wail Tuck ya tale and run son, before ya chest come undone and spill ya guts for C's fun None challenge Cerulean so fuck what you done or find yourself very close to Big Pun One...Hate to do put the nail in your coffin but your lyrics were deemed to fail They're simple and pale, derailed and shaky hidden behind the veil of a Cerulean gale You got a flow more off track than a broken cross-fader, I'mma "snap" this "alligator" Horizon's loss's waitor, win's later, couldn't "beat" shit if he was a "chronic" masturbator Rhymes of gore that tore through many men pushed afore by my sleeping demon You brought me close to punching you physically but your bowel's too full of semen Yo I'll continue to push more flows through the doors of history's core and rap's lore Started a war like it's a chore man, my lines are etched from pure arrogance and bore While H went berzerk cos it hurts his head needing tripple effort to kick just one verse I get immersed in free flows, so prepare for the worst dog and pack ya skirt and purse BYE BYE! |
Hmm...well i could post 10 lines if i wanted to but i think i'll go the distance on this WANNABE...U KNOW WHO U FUCKIN WIT...CALL ME GANGSSTARSHIT HA HA...
Cerulean a Munichian* na more like peruvian, I-see-through-him His-flow-is-thin i bent u outta shape... ..............like a spasticated manachin, Stretched lines i seen previous rhymes u wack a fact know why?, coz ur words hit u back like nickels & dimes to homless guys, :laugh: So face it a blind verse is ur only way of winnin, fact is ur words r like a fuel & ur the lamp.... ........ery time u speak ur name is dimmin, (Where are you??) U aint worthy of this battle u get slaughtered like cattle, can tell u a newb by ur style baby like while shakin his rattle, Cryin fo momma coz he can't maintain even a lil bit of power, Actually baby u aint got power dont feel sore... ..............momma got the talcum powder, :laugh2: To rectify that sore ass after this ass kickin, he got beat like a hillbilly after an ass whoopin, (Yee-HAH) Done consider yourself merked...have a good day :thumbup: |
horzon won this because of his lines wern't stretched! He had more hitting punches that were better and more creativity his flow was the better style and just better at everything. The other verse was okay so no disrespect but I thought horzon definatly took this his verse was alot better.
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/\ Hmm u my friend and thats cool but...NO CREW VOTES DUH Don't worry i'll get this removed
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yeah no worries... let's get plenty non crew votes please!!! thanks y'all
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Upping the thread under my new name remember GangsStarShit
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CERULEAN..lines far too stertched which ruined your flow...
apart from that it was all self glorification i didnt see any punches that connected wit ur opponent elevate GANGSTAR-nice spit good flow...mainly cos u used plenty of multies nice easy to read structure sum very gud concepts/creativity in your ounches maybe u cud add sum more personals but overall very nice...very one-sided votegangstar return tha fav plz men. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136222 |
cer - structure was bad, too stretched flow was off... metas were ok, no wordplay really.... punches were weak, and some ok disses. decent verse.
grangstar, actually attempted to be witty... flow was decent... punches were ok. disses were ebtter than the other guys... metas were ok, no good wordplay really but, decent verse. vote - gangstar, for a overall better verse. vote on my punchline battle. wit marv..j... |
UP this thread for the General GangsStarShit......
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Uppin yet again GENERAL GANGSSTARSHIT SAYS...NO SLEEPIN!!!
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UPPIN............come on vote people! return the favours!
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