Ready vs. MARVOLoUsJ1009 cmon vote ppl
 

chek in. u no the rules im spittin first.

okay umm i suppose da drop 30 minutes after u or we both r??

after me so wen i post u have 30 min to respond with a verse or i win by default

i burn you like a cigarette so me ull never forget/
my shit so hot the shit u say ur gonna regret/
wit yo gun you like a dick son quick to bust/
my gun i use it so much its never gon rust/
u is a character kid u shude be on cartoon network/
and i knew u was a faget ya boy said u got good headwork/
and wen ya girl saw my dick playa all she cud do was nod man/
and she was catchin my balls as if she was dennis rodman/
yo my flow is dangerous and it only gets worse/
cuz my 'biscuit' will leave u 'limp' like 'fred durst'/
you wanna battle and you gonna be spittin garbage shit like trash/
you mite say im a faget the way i got in yo ass/

dude is a lame aint nobody feelin dis guy,goin at jay u must be willin da die-
y did i even battle dis corny nigga dis "new-bee" should be still in a "hive"-
(get it newbie=new bee u'll get da punch)

i bring more da battles beside's a cheap diss,nun of ya lines could beat dis-
u thought if u put ya "calender unda da bed" u could hide ya "week(ness)"-

i doub't ya records get played,beef with me dunny weapons get sprayed-
u got kidds? oh well they gon find ya "sun" some where dead in a "shade"-
(sun,son...)

im dissin u so hey u probly wont feel dis,trust me u'll be in a sealed ditch-
sick when its come 2 a skilled diss,& "r.b" was good 4 u cuzz u a "real-bitch"-

you come on here sayin u nice but datz not whut ya raps says dunn-
im finished my 10 lines but dis nigga "ready" aint even "half way done"-

probly in a skirt,think about ya moms a feel with ya body in a hearse nites-
no clothes n bitches ya "road da riches" gon be "shaky like ali on a dirt bike"-

nuff said....vote ppl and it will be returned

uppin 4 some votes ppl pleez no hate votes be real nahmean dont vote against me just bcuzz i go around lookin da battle everybody it aint no beef nahmean

uppin for votes

uppin for votes

Opening:Marvolous
Punches:Marv...Readys shit was too basic
Wordplay:definitely Marv
Structure:Marv
Flow:Marv
Im not goin on any longer..Ready..try goin after someone new also you an ammy son

V/Marvelous for overall merkn son..return the favor

opening: ready
punches:ready
flow:ready
structure: ready

v- goes to ready

ready:u is a character kid u shude be on cartoon network/
and i knew u was a faget ya boy said u got good headwork/

killer line
man my vote goes to ready

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me vs. rapburn

Ready I feel ya shit,Marv you comin with that amazing vocab n wordplay, hard punches fa sho this is really close for me......vote: Marv by a hair

don't sleep on mine. stay up ya'll, 1.

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...009#post1425009

lmaooooo yo all dem votes is crazee deliquint ur gonna get banned if u keep doin dat shit dunn 4real u neva explain ya vote

uppin for votes

marv-tight flow..good structure
nice punches wit gud wordplay and concepts
ready-ok flow structure...u need to upp creativity
make ur lines longer and use personals and metas..
jus elevate....
vote-marv

both yall return tha fav....