J DOT vs Energy
 

aight hoe, u kno how we doin it, blind spit, due in 30 min. fuk check in, this is both our check in

I suggest you get an 'Energy' drink you wack fuck

:laugh:
I think you getting riding MC Riot's nuts
u suposed to be a boy, but you crying like a girl
"This is my 'enemy room', i hate em all, and fuk tha world"
im gettin tired of you bitching back and forth, about who's hot, who's not, tryna be J DOT
But listen, you really wanna be like this dude?
im not even on yo team, and you made me co-leader of yo crew
im flattered, but not used to so much attention
fuk it, get off my nuts, its time for suspension
bitch, i know a lot of people iller than u, just check it out
change whats under yo name, fore' u get hit in yo mouth
bitch keep cryin bout who made the name to the crew im in
u aint got no say-so, until u can get one win
fuk it, your exposed, stay off my nuts
imma leave this damn battle, with two middle fingers up :thefinger

i fucked up, i guees im like u
here it go:


I suggest you get an 'Energy' drink you wack fuck :spit:
i think your gettin tired ridin MC Riot's nuts
:hump:
you suposed to be a boy, but u cryin like a girl

"this is my enemy's room, i hate em all, and fuk tha world
im gettin tired of hearin you bitch back and forth, about who's hot, who's not, tryna be J DOT
But listen, you really wanna be like this dude?
im not even on yo team and you made me co-leader of yo crew
im flattered, but not used to so much attention
fuk it, get off my nuts, its time for a suspension
bitch, i know a lot of people iller that u, just check it out
change whats under yo name, or get hit in yo mouth
this bitch keep cryin bout who made the name to the crew im in
u aint go no say-so, until u can get one win
fuk it, your exposed, stay off my nuts
imma leave this damn battle, with two middle fingers up
:thefinger

You sound pretty spastic... i'll fly you away like an elastic//
you can't rap sick your trippin ur verse sounded like u were actin//
your a fake you better learn dat, cause jay ur a sissy act//
when you spit some shit trust me it literally is to capasity//
You wanted to be in my crew but couldn't I let you down// ah 2 bad :gfy:
So stop your crying and go back to lethal sinz n lik some asshole//
wheres your skills... this chump thinks he can get a record deal/
you think your jay see so you had to call yourself after him//
your the most fake artist that people hate to see plus yer dim//
my lyrics are giving you hullusinations and shit dis was just my intoduction//

is that it?

to let ya'll kno, he dint turn me down, i never even flowed to get in, i was automatically in, and made co-leader...wtf
i said i wanted in, but then changed my mind, cause he was bitching, but i'll let ya'll decide...who won

I asked you and you jumped crews and went into lethal sinz which is the honest truth....

energy you had good vocabulary but the words u said didnt go wit the rest of the sentence~~like when you said fly away like an elastic~~that shit dont go together~~just an example~~

i think j took dis one~~he did the research wit da links and he stayed confident and he had better punches than you~~

upping this thread jay you came really week but you just winged alot man in your verse plus you went over the 10 line rule... But it's the publics opinion upping for votes.

I think I gots 2 go 4 J Dot, he came so much stronger there, and he spit true and it actually made sense, unlike Energy who, as usual, managed to completely not rhyme, oh wait, he had him and dim, but thats it in the whole verse, and I think J easily had this,


vote:: J Dot

fuk u energy, 10 lines is 5 bars, i go by bars, 10 bars, 20 lines

If i could Poll Vote it would be J Dot

he head better dissing , flow and punchlines

Other guy needs to brush up on his skills

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either flow was any good but since i have to pick one of you dicks I'll pick the one who didnt make me wanna be sick......J-Dot.....

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this was easy, jay dot beat him....

he had a better flow, punches and structure!

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no offence but jdot had it all the way both not too bad but holla back

v/jdot

J got this with better punches and structure. I wasnt feelin energys thing at all. Couldnt really see tha rhymes in it. But Jdot took this one easily with better flow, structure, and punches.

Vote-Jdot

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