oOnOn_StOpOo vs. ice pick
 

battle

Checked in both spits due in 15 minutes after he checks in

I'm crazy with this axe its just practice to bash this
20 year old "PRODIGY" into the dirt like FREE INTERNET ACCESS
wrap your body in plastic and duct tape you to random faggots' matress
with a sign on your back that say "Drug and Disease Free have at it"
Ice got more TOOLS to defeat you than CRAFTMATIC
victory to you is haphazard
but your chance of defeat is more pragmatic
I "clap clap" rapid
to bash fags back"words"
you just got your "L's" Mr Boogie Down
in R-town we known to JACK herbs
"Could It Be" your LACK in skill
I speak fire with the mic that melts ya grill.
you forgot to pack "Just In Case like Jahiem"
this is how you make a SMART alleck "start to SCREAM"

Check Tha Records......no Losses And All Killz///
Didnt Want To Take It Dis Far But Now Its Ya Blood Ima Have To Spill///
What Kinda Name Is Ice Pick////fuck It....just Know Ur Lifes In Danger When You Hear Tha Gun Click///hede Tha Warnin Ya Headed For Tha Worst///after Im Done Witchu Its Ya Lifeless Body Laying In Tha Hearst///thought Bout Letting Ya Live But I Changed Mah Mind///got Mah Flow Heatin Up And Mah Shotty Ready To Grind///take A Trip To Tha Boogie And Ill Show U Why We Dont Sleep///got Gunz That'll Sound Of To The Ryhthm Of The Beat///

Ice Pick
structure isnt very good...u started out with stretched lines...then went to short lines...and ended with stretched lines again...flow fell off because of ur inconsistency...no multis...wordplay was pretty good...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

oOnOn_StOpOo
structure is wack...write ur lines down the page...not in paragraphs...flow fell off due to ur wack structure...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals....

Overall
neither had good personals...neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had multis...Ice Pick had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Ice Pick gets my vote...

VOTE - ICE PICK

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once again my boy ice pick took it(and i like the way u change your style)dont wanna bore ppl

this was a close one, not an easy one for pick, stopooo(w/e) gave him a battle

i like the way 'ice pick' made his flow stick together, although the wordings were lame to me...his puches were st8 and his rhymin was coo

stopooo(w/e)-started out nursery, but then picked it up, but maybe a lil too late (if u wouldve picked it up at the beginning,and ran wit it, u wouldve RAN WIT IT)

v/ice pick

fuk...sry 4 freepost, but fuk it...need 1 HONEST vote to b thru
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135214

ice had it pretty much all the way but i like the closing of non stops better but i still vote for ice

v/icepick

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ice pick had a lil more structure and his punches connected pretty well
didnt really have any personals but hey sometimes it dont matter like in this battle
umm ooooo didnt have no sort of structure i kind of got bored with it once i saw the outline
work on ya structure more and chop them down and deliever some punches and let em kno wha u about
Stay Focused

Vote=Ice