tragic religion
 

aight i've jus started,so tell me if this was worth posting...

Some ya’ll believe its prediction ,but to me its jus fiction,
Poverty n hunger it aint fixin, hatred n racism is what its mixin,
It’itself is a contadiction , priests are practicing crucifixion,
How are those stories ta be true,this is what Im asking you,
What am I missing?these testaments don’t stick like paper ta glue,
They deceive weak minds & brainwash as they take your money,
I believe it’s a crime,but they claim it’s the wish of crist almighty,
Bible ta “cleanse yourself”,nah I’d rather jus believen myself,
Centuries past,religion’s been a scam,your money in there hand,
They will be eternally damned for tarnishing the word of man,
Your mind is yours n should’nt be tampered with by biblical myths,
Behind closed doors,priests are decietfull n full of shit,
Some alcoholics n others moleste the innocents of kids,
Open hand taking cash donations in the name of god,
Damn we all must admit it’s a fuckin brilliant fraud,
As this day turns to night a nun is confused on whats right,
She prays n deliberates for a day awaiting a final answer,
Kneeling B4 what she believes but only silence meets her,
Her minds bares blank thoughts, but her heart is heavy
She gives thanks n for her sin she will repent n is ready,
A single tear of shame rolls down her face,
Not dropped but caught by her pregnant waist,
She shakes n wets her lips clinching a blade in her fist,
She quetly recites 10 hail mary’s as she cuts her wrists,
This women has takin 2 lives 2 fix 1 sin,
Cause she was brainwashed by religion,….

Aight I don’t want any1 takin this the wrong way,
I know religion is a touchy subject for some,
this was jus a view,I aint religious it was jus something I thuoght of…
I’d relly appreciate some feedback considering this my first post…

that shits good, i share the same views as you too!
nicely done...

Thanks Man, I Appreciate Your Opinion...

Think newbies should stick together so.....
Anyway, yer flow's good... I liked it... I'd like to do a battle with ya someday, bro!

sure just p/m me n tell me when n i'll set it up,no hate though...peace n thanks for ya opinion..

Can I Get A Vets Opinion On This Piece......

im 20 yrs old n been doin dis shit since i was 15....
da shit was nuttin but based facts i liked ur topic shit was real n i like dat in rap
u got sum good skills kid keep doin ya thing check me out 8/10

thanks man,honest opinion are really appreciated....i'll keep my shit up...