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seveno8 vs *The~Star*
iighyt deez r the rules u set right?
10 lines max no d/r no stretching I spit 1st soon as u check in i'll spit my verse iight |
Cool...Let's get it poppin....Good Luck
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dis gon' be more one sided than the november election
i'm beatin dis bitch faster than a horny niggas lonley erection i don't know what u expectin' but don't expect 2 be winnin' u can give niggas shevols and dey won't dig what u spittin u aint no "star" you just don't light in the closet i must be a QB cuz i got dis shit in da pocket you makin death wishes like writtin wills you couldn't be spitin dope shit if you spit pills iight dats all me right thurr you up... good luck |
yo i fucked up dis line> ... "u aint no "star" you just don't light in the closet
i must be a QB cuz i got dis shit in da pocket" replace don't with the :) |
Nice verse, but I’m taking this………
You beating me equals a joke, like drowning people choke
Thinking it’s a hoax, you get more winded like a tornado, why you provoke I’m dropping this dude faster then the job market percentage He fucked with me, so I left him like his skills….disfigured & don’t mention Mad cuz I create flames burning ya name up, just like ya rep Got cha playing minds games to the point you in a mental institution needing help Seven-o-eight, more like, Star-I-love-to-hate, cuz you know you intimidated You graphite, I’m erasing you cuz you nothing, you Not Even Rated I’m stabbing ya rhymes up more than OJ Simpson stabbed his wife That’s a infinite amount of times, cold-hearted, you longer have life |
100 posts & up 2 Vote |
I think Star took this one. She had good rhymes in hers. 708 had good shit too but that "dope" line is kinda played out. Star came with some originality in metas like the tornado and winded one. Star gets the vote with good punches and metas.
Vote-Star Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136 |
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uppin....uppin..... don't wanna waste a good battle
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708, ya punches were def. dope shit, little multiples thats aiight, ya wordplay was the tighthest, it was a bit hard to flow to, the personals were alright, nothing bad nothing really amazing, some dope shit though The Star, Your mulitples and flow was fucking amazing, that shit sounded dope in my head, other than that though you didnt really have much, nice vocab, this would make a good audio, but for text 708 takes this vote: 708 Removed.. need 100 posts to vote |
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