|
Sporadic Vs ibraheem (Topical)
10 Line MIN anything over 10 lines is ok
No crew votes No Dick Riding Well explained Good Luck |
The topic of choice is about september the 11th!!!!
|
I rush to the car shit im late little did i know fate had something up its sleeve
deaths got me caught like a spider ...in its souless cobweb weave Put my foot to the gas peddle damn i hope i dont get FIRED im tired my heads pounding from going on the piss ...cant stop i have no time to sit and reminice i finally get there put money in the meter for my 10 hours as i looked at my future grave ...the place i work the twin towers I hope they dont sack me and they havent found someone to replace i work on the top floor but later im going further ...to the gates in the highest place i rush to my seat hoping nobody will see me and detect looking at me harshly with no respect ...like a murder suspect i get on with my work quietly franticly typing i gotta job to protect HOLY SHIT someone screams theres a plane ...coming right at the tower direct BANG its like an earthquake the shake and impact is immense a cold hearted sucide bomb attack ...so wheres our fucking department of defence? I brush past people to seek my surival salvation but nobody could get past the inferno ...so they jumped out windows with no hesitation two choices stay here and wait to be cremated alive or take my last trip down through the window ...and take my last dive i take the dive memories flash past as i plunge to my death last words to my loved ones with a whisper "i love you" ..with my very last breath Good luck |
For me as a theorist on political judgments/
I will raise some questions about the 911 segments/ Businesses corrupted and billions of dollars lost/ All that aint shit for the thousands of life’s it cost / Four planes highjacked for two hours what the fuck/ Is that how much the American air force suck/ It aint that trust me its people who worship the buck/ See politions giving speeches like its a damn carnival/ Killing innocent lives then marching in the funerals/ I got an idea that I would like you to join/ Thinking GW Bush and binladin 2 different faces of the same coin/ Thinking people are stupid lets blame it all on taliban/ When two wars legalised and share prices went down/ Its funny when you look at the world from the truth lens/ 911 is like an idiot blown his car with his kids 2 get insurance/ peace |
shit miss spelled politicians on the 8th line
dont hold it against me |
rite let gets some votes in this shit..i will return the votes on your battles dont let this ish sleep
|
upping this theard...give us some votes..u cunts!!!
|
breakdown...................
sporadic........ ... u came nice... kinda simplistic rhymes.. but u stressed teh topic good ..staying focused throughout your verse..... you explained it well.... it was atleast drawling a picture in my head..... i liked it.... you kinda stratched some lines though... but for the most part flow was on.... Ibraheem- you had real nice multis... keeping the verse with a nice flow... but again u kinda streatched your bars out to.....you seem to have more of the 'battle mind set... dun worry i do the same in topicals..... im just saying u need to fovus more on drawling a picture......k my vote- Sporadic..... liked the mental picture.... nice steady flow for the most part... i took the time.. so boht of u should take the time...... and drop a vote on this.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136489 ^ thanks..... keep progressin boys |
|
upping............................................
|
i feel what you saying man but you dont have to spit a story on topicals its a topic that you have to represent safe for the advise though i will keep it in mind
|
upiing did theard!!..dont forget to poll ur votes..vote will be returned
|
Upping^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
|
upping 2 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
|
upping this theard dont let this rest ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
|
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:35 AM. |