Collab::Star & WillNova::"Brake Up...Make Up"
Some mello storytellin right here,check it out.........
WillNova=Blue::Star=Red "Brake Up....Make Up" I cared for u, even makin good figures// and u hoin around messin wit these clown niggas// Spendin to much time on that job Then left me in the house quick to roll wit ya mob// just stop, I ain't never hurt u, u must be crazed// my job paid fo ya clothes, my sex left u amazed// Yeah it was good for the time beenin But I wanted something more,so I started creeping// jus like u, u stay pushin my buttons// fuck frontin, u mean our love meant nuttin// Guess not,you wasn't giving what I need So I fucked with ya cuz!He was understanding me// he don't love u, he fucked u jus to get at me// u fell fo it, the hell wit it, take ya stuff and leave// Wait baby!I think we can work this all out Never had nobody that can make say they whole name in a shout// too late fo apologizes, shoulda thought that before// u a whore, fuck my cuz, no need to show u to the door// Baby you know you love me,who greater do you Adore? What the fuck?How could you call me a whore?// are u sure? If u luv me then why did you cheat// ya excuses are weak, I guess u can't change a freak// Well if you gave me dick when I wanted,I wouldn't have been committed of this crime But you too busy on the grind,when I wanted the concentration of ya mind// I'm sorry I was so blind, I just try to give u the best// I was so worried about the money, I forgot about the sex// Glad that you see,but it ain't just that,I wanna spend time with cha When the last time do you remember us ever taking a picture// I feel ya, startin now, it jus me and u// cheat again were thru, I'll lose all trust in u// Alright then,this how I want it to be Now we understanding each other...good future I see// |
i like to thank my gurl Star fo doing this collab wit me, madd luv... now we want sum feedback to see wat ya think
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U P P I N
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pretty good collabo u both did a good job hope if da relationship real though works out keep postin peep me out holla back im in open mic n 2 open battles peace
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Looking 4 some peeps 2 check this out
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NICE PEICE..
original.. good rhymes now i feel like taking this idea... :thumbup: |
U P P I N
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goodlook for the feedback raw killa and Xentrix, we appriciate it, hahahaha, naw the relationships not real.... but it could be....
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It Was Good
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u p p i n
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Nice stuff,like the way it goes back and forth...good emotion,vocab was basic but thats kool! Nice collab...
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Trying 2 get some peeps 2 peep this
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Uppin 4 peeps to peep
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nice shit dawg. The only thing I think you could've done a lil bit better with is the rhyme structure. But what can I say homie? You did ya thing! Mad props dawg! Peep my battle
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nice shit it would be good if you made a adiuo on this and make it a song....
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