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dawgfatha_13 V/S 7*0*8*
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I'll go easy on you since you wanna elevate.But im tellin' you i aint very good....lets get this poppin'
If you want to elevate you better listen to me... I was mackin my first bitches when you was learnin to pee... 708?Is that a type of car*?.. If it is you need a new imagination like I need some cigarrete tar... You couldnt 'spit deadly' if you was a goddam cobra... And you certainly could not be 'phat'...even if your name was Oprah... My 'punches' will leave you outta air like a couple of flat tires... I'll have hit you so hard I'll leave ya trying to untwist your neck with a pair of pliars.. You couldnt smell beef if you worked at Dairy Queen... My final punches'll leave you so fucked up your doctor'll think I somehow managed to hacked your genes... BITCH! *-In europe people have car models with 3 digit numbers. |
yo, dawgfather, that shit was hot. git wit me and we can go places
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iight man i'm up hope ya'll like dis shit... 1,2,3....
u like blocked rivers, abosolutly no flow like omarion yo rank on rb is so low( solo) you overlooked/ like dorphs and a basketball game u can be holdin a torch and still won't spark up a flame mother goose rhymes, but we know how the story go you making rb look bad like Master P. and romeo u say u got toxic spit but ya rhymes aint sick u say u the dawgfather but 2 me you a bitch oprah punches neva work don't you see why u gettin on her? u sopposed 2 be dissin me lyrically, u disable like a death mute tryin 2 spit like a drunk boxer aint none of your punches hit take a look and see all the punches and personals u lack i'm gettin all the votes even yo shoulders and spin got my back |
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Dawg,
you came pretty hard, not many personals but i loved the flow. Some nice punchlines they were pretty hot, i loved this You couldnt 'spit deadly' if you was a goddam cobra... And you certainly could not be 'phat'...even if your name was Oprah... ^that shit was hot good drop dog 708, You kind of feeded of his verse, you had some nice punches though, a few personals didnt think you came hard enough though, good job still vote: dawg <3peace (return the favor) |
^^thx for the vote.ill return the favour later.uppin...
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i hella liked dawgs verse that shit was true emcee shit seemed to me to be like a real battle 708 had some good shit but because of dawgs endless punches he wins it return the favors delinquint vs optimal delinquint vs novakane |
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up up up up up up up up upin 4 votes....
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mah vote
dawg you had some good punches and you came pretty hard but it was pretty basics but the line i liked was
"My 'punches' will leave you outta air like a couple of flat tires..." but then i read 7*0*8*'s verses and they had me weak his shit totaly reversed your rap and used it against you and he had alot of creativity my favorite line was "oprah punches neva work don't you see why u gettin on her? u sopposed 2 be dissin me" the only thing about yours i didnt like is that you had spelling errors v/ 7*0*8* |
Oh yeah return the favor my battles in Signiture.
Thanks! And now some random shit so i can post this cuz it wasnt 50 characters but now it is. :laugh: |
uppin 4 some votes,
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stop dickriding
yo dawg was alright but his rhymes were kinda off.since when do they sell beef at dairy queen?what is he talking about.i give it to 708 his flow was better and his rhymes made more since plus i was feeling him calling dawgfather a bitch that was slick.708 got it in my mind cuz basically hes just a better mc.
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708 gets the win with better punches. Keep elevatin though dawgfatha. 708 had a good rhyme structure. His flow came out better. 708 gets the vote with harder punches, more creativity, and a better structure.
Vote-708 Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137230 |
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