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this is my first ever rap beat. was a big change from making dance music.
Hi
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It is only the idea of the beat, and about 1 minute something... Feedback please.

.::Aight Check It::.

its aight...your trying to switch it up too much....it was enjoying bassline....but the thing in the back was annoying..

Um...you coulda made it hot...like use that intro....but turn the bassline into a sick ass like bump bump bump bump (kinda fast) then have it be like (mid tempo) bump bump ...bump bump....than have chorus bump bump bump kinda fast

No idea if that helps I am no beat maker but thats how it registers in my head...

NIce for first time just keep up with ya shit

~R~

Jea that wasn't bad for ya first beat. I was gonna post my first beat on here but it sounded like shit LOL. You made that wit Fruity Loops didn't you. Uhh the constant for tha back round was missing to make it complete....like when you beatbox there's tha humming. Need to feel it in but not bad.
~I.T.~