spiky vs 2hard2lose
 

rules r

no d/r
no crew
no biting
and etc....

u spit first
check in 8:30
verse due friday
befo 5pm

check in fo now
also need 50 post to vote
aight peace

check-in no limit lyrics?????????? aight then but this well be my 1rst

lets go aight no beef
o yea 10 lines max aight
lets go

u wanna drop right now if so im down lol lemme no soon aight peace

as long its b4 friday aight u can go at any time
so hurry up so i cn go

aight rush ready to be crushed?

Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer//
ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's//
but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin//
im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?//
come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact//
why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.//
what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?//
my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?//
cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit//
cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date//
alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint//

man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose
was tying yo shoe/
my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who
u fin to lose to/
i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on
tha attack/
my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk
yo ass with a bat/
i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did
that/
i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/
to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had
to tackle/
see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/
cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change
to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/
so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/

started voting people aight
need 50 post to vote or over 50
uppin fo vote now

Weak Battle...

Punches- Weak on both sides.... 2h2l
Flow- 2h2l
Metas- Tie
Multis- Tie
Structure- 2h2l
Originality- Niether

Final Vote--- 2h2l

comments--- weak battle.... elavate... rush... opener.. wat was that.. tie my shoe?... lol.... not much i can say

Peep Battle N Vote Fair no hate
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850

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need to win
uppin fo some votes

weak battle, fake ass emcees...dont use the fuckin /'s you look like faggots...learn how to throw harder punches and definitely elevate, this battle is to weak for me to vote on

Weak, weak, weak.

Punches: weak, but 2h2l
personals: weak, again 2h2l
metas: neither
multis: neither
structure/flow: rush

overall: 2h2l


That battle was weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak. Seriously, elevate. Read other battles and see what really good battlers do, and then use your own concepts. Just write, and write, and write until you get better.

Rush u had structure and a flow mega point fo u
u need change punches where they realy work and multis
where as u needs to but still u did all right
7.5/10

2Hard2Lose i seen no punches but u had a better structure
then him yo flow was weak u points fo that like Reaper said
write and write until u get better
6/10

diss was a weak battle
but i'll give it 2, 2h2l
his structure was better
n so was hi flow
v/2H2L
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2hard2loose
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer//
ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's//
No, flow's terrible
but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin//
im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?//
Blah, filler, still no flow
come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact//
why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.//
WACK!
what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?//
my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?//
Neh, you suck
cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit//
cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date//
alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint//
Haha... bushwack yourself in the head

That verse ^^ yes that one, was utter shit.I know your new, but keep working on all aspects of battling.

Rush
man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose
was tying yo shoe/
my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who
u fin to lose to/
pfft, name flip could of been better
i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on
tha attack/
my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk
yo ass with a bat/
Blah
i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did
that/
i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/
vocabs horrible, 'baby couldnt did that' did you mean 'could of'?
to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had
to tackle/
see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/
cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change
to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/
so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/
Flows retarded, battle/tackle line could of been flipped better.All the lines after it though, sucked dildos

Structures unco, some meta's... but weren't used effectively, the battle/tackle line being a prime example.Up your vocab & your wording

V/Rush;argh you both sucked, but Rush gets my vote.

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