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DV8 07-21-04 09:39 PM

NO "PROPS" FOR YOU
 
THIS WAS A VERSE FOR A SONG I WROTE "PROPS"

This world’s spinning timelessly, Im one of the finest gee,
This peak is 2 steep 2 climb , jus read the warning signs,
You spitting lifelessly, while your knowledge is over righteous,
Im the top n still da brightest, step up n enter your mid life crisis,
My souls “e”motionless, blackend by eclipse’s darkness,
Spark twists, with sharp fists leavin U with a mangled carcus
ILL-fusion sentences, leavin illusions worse than mental institutions,
Brain contusions, leavin grussom endings without formal conclusions,
Like an Ace taped with blades, this deal is a lethal fomula,
Spawning tactics against spastics that mutilate n re-form-ya,
Scorned-ya, de-born ya, burn ya BIO, mask ya style-get killed B-4 trial,
Vile remedies, cut off your extremedies, mauled by my kaotic tendencies,
Frontin “it’s a shame-yo”,getting strangled n struck from every angle,
Be thankfull, you’ve been “de-pleated”blood drained from head n ankles,
Using 1 quartre my skill, I will still produce the “k”in “ill”,
Ya games not a hard find, you’d be better off a blind mime,
Boo’ed on stage, ya ain’t fish but”ya’ll be finish’d after my lines”,
Can’t say it was nice ta meet ya, so don’t expect me ta greet ya,
Rather pumble n beat ya,till ya body is flatter than da floor beneath-ya,
I leave opponents bruisin, ripped in da park for ”amuzement”,
Its obvious your left behind in the dark n utter confusion,
You envisioned recognition, but da jury has reached a decision,
Don’t threat, you were never noticed so you won’t be forgot,
Talentless emcees must drift over seas ta gain props,
Your future here stops, skills you ain’t got….
………………………………………… ………..sorry for whatever you thought,

Hattrick 07-21-04 10:38 PM

that shit was hot, i dont know if it would sound good as an audio, but def. some nice lines

i like
Frontin “it’s a shame-yo”,getting strangled n struck from every angle,
Be thankfull, you’ve been “de-pleated”blood drained from head n ankles,

keep it up kid

DV8 07-22-04 01:24 AM

thanks for the opinion hattrick..i'll peep ya battles...

MC_SYX 07-22-04 01:37 AM

I like that fact it was with metaphoors and shit, nice writin. con sider writin poetry

DV8 07-22-04 05:42 AM

so ya think im more of a poet than a rapper,koo,maybe we should battle for fun sometime??,jus ta see how i do at that.


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