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Kizza--VS--Ice Pick
rules:15 lines
both spit after check in you drop firs or me? |
How about both berse due in 15 minutes
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I got exactly 6:45 PST so we drop at 7.
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Yo Kizza welcome to my MATRIX
My name alone is much too much for you to handle all fingers and no thumbs so you can't even hold a candle To this homicidal idol I stop vitals in madd men your verse was severely holed and more porous than lambskin Kizza is infected with the wackness and can't seem to shake it I'll defeat you even spitting at just 1 percent of my apex Which is more than enough to render you free from speeches you become freakishly speechless and aromaticaly wreak of weakness I've already killed you compared to my intellect you're a gorilla ya whole verse was suspect and my last bar was iller Than anything you've ever bitten written or spitten word I cop over your littered text and comence to shittin turds You're obsurd every word but you beef with this feindish animal and your name mixed with skill makes less sense than vegan cannibles |
Talons will be esssential to my credential in this battlescape
lyrically attack you via rape, after these lines, on your grave I will traipse I’ll confirm my victory throughout history Your life story will be studied on Unsolved Mysteries histerectomies must be ‘undertaken’ on sheila mcs wrap my mic around your throat and let you 'pick' the tree time I 'stick' this 'pick',I'm on an 'ice' cold killin spree yo rhymes stickin' ta me like a glueless uhu you crooked on a head like a tilted fubu I went first overall at the draft wowed em wit my sticks while you was the two hundredth pick, for chuckin up bricks time for me to close the freeza on this breeza fucked ya mind so hard I gave ya ass amnesia good luck to ice pick |
nice spit Pick. looking for some votes!!!!!!!!!!
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pick really upped his game since our battle i gotta give this one to him
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uppin for votes ya'll!!!!!!
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kizza came out with wordplay all verse long, structure was a lil off and complexity was pretty good no personals tho
ice pick your structure was off which was why you probly will lose this battle but you had a good concept some of your punches stung but not hard enough Vote=Kizza Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Pick,
Ya had some pretty hot punchlines, not many personals- some pretty HOT multies i loved this one: Which is more than enough to render you free from speeches you become freakishly speechless and aromaticaly wreak of weakness that shit was dope, everything else was kinda weak tho, your closer wasnt that great good job over all though. Kizza, Your transistions from line to line was dope, you had some hawt flow, bars were a bit stretched, thats aiight tho, you had some hawt personals and a few multies, overall you came harder- close battle tho vote: kizza |
uppin dis fa votez yall!!!!
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I give it to ice pick...kizza's got real fillerish at the end. granted ice picks structure was fukked i just heard hotter shit in there. not a lot of punches or personals from either end this was more like picking one open mic over another. a word of advice to ice pick...its obvious youre real smart but if you want your battle to sound better id dumb your vocab down some. not too much just get rid of words like apex. nice spit from kizza it was close i just likes pick's better.
\/hit me up honestly\/ |
very close...
both yall need to elevate im gonago wit kizza coz he had harder punches not a lot init structure woz gud by both |
aight um kizza wins dis shit yo y had a better structure even tho some of ya lines were longer then other's u had betta punchlines i aitn didn't really see no personals from nun of ya'll but overall in like a real street battle u would of wun..umm pick ya structure fuked u up dunn 4 real i eman u couldn't keep ya lines da same length and dat fukked up ya flow plus da shit u was sayin sound like u just started rappin im not tryin da play u or nothin just givin my opinion nahmean
my vote-kizza return da favor ya'll MaRVOLOUSJ1009 VS GRENADE...its on dis page |
someone missed a vote on our poll, I have things scored 4-2 and it only say 3-2 in the poll.
uppin dis fa votes!! |
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