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D vs. VA
Text Battle Lines: 10 + No: Crew Hate D/r Recycling Feeding Biting Bullshit Newb Votes (if you dont have 3 wins +, DONT VOTE) Due: 45 Minutes After Check. If You Agree With These Rules, Check In, If Not Pm A Complaint. |
Put The Noose Around Ya Torso, Toast You Like A Cersont Being In The Rap Game, Your Never Fervent, So Wack You Should Use a Curved-Font I Serve-On Any Atmosphere, You Can Tell My Words Taunt Talking Like You From The Hood But Whiter Than Snow In Vermont* In Captivity, Creativity Like An Animal-is-Seen Rules Being-No Biting, But You Feed More Than Canibal-Pheenes Beat-Me? Theres No Promise, And Jus To Be Honest The Voctory For Me is Plain Ans Simple Like The Amish You Cant Touch Me Like The Bubble Boy, Im a Different Species You Couldnt Spit Hot Shit If You Microwaved Ya Regurgitated Feces explanations: *Vermont=VA, Snows There |
[b]Ill retire my text, when DELI Quits producin a Sub. (deli-n-quit)
Cause if hed pay attention to my order, i asked for no BEEF with my grub. A crews Useless thug, i want a bowl of cheddar and a bag of green. rag are jeans? id be upset with life too If I left to Jock a MAgazine.(eastbay-4-life/ sig) ... Its Nice to mention, your a delinquint to the system. If You have any Such Goals, I think Youve missed em. (this battles out of your reach) If Not....List em, id be glad to work up a job application for you. cause I-net battling wont educate, yet make society ingore you. he scores few(record 3-0), im 200 posts and 10 votes ahead. just a fact, too make it simple...scope this page, all jokes are RED. (his sig and name) you want to keep em entertained? well these folks are fed...your spit is dry. lips are fried, even hittin 55 in a MAZDA ....you couldnt STICK to DRIVE. if you cant master the basics, why come in over your head. its 12:00 and since your underage(level 1)...ILL help put you to bed. well....nuff sed, looks like your outta LUCK, heres a dark gray CLOVER. Like Larry Bird's retire speech, I rename you "celtics"...cuz just like Larry's written text, this GAMES OVER.[b] |
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Good shit..good battle. Verbal Abuse had harder punches than D's. D did have a good structure though as well as VA. But VA's structure was a little off on that last line. However I think he had D the whole verse hittin him with personals and good punches. Good wordplay on the name (deli quit)...Good battle. Big ups ta both, but VA gets tha vote.
Vote-VA Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136783 |
ight upping for some more votes in this m,otherfucking bitcvh
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Del I was feelin ya flow and you had a good structure to deliver it. good wordplay, few personals. punches were good.
VA you were on a higher tip on this one. nice lines, great punches and some good personals. good battle, very close but I give my vote to Verbal Abuse. return da fava ya'll http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136835 thanks |
flow:verbal abuse
punches:verbal abuse structure:verbal abuse wordplay:verbal abuse opener:verbal abuse closer:bout even pretty much verbal abuse won every catagory...... but not by much...he barely managed..... v/verbal abuse |
thanx 3 up....
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aight this was a close battle a very close battle V.A you had a nice verse and you had good wordplay but you need 2 chop all that shit down you put in way 2 many words and you need 2 use some complexity and elevate some u can work on ya structure 2 D You had a nice drop 2 ya structure was kinda diff but it got the job done i liked ya wordplay and u had some nice meta's and ya punches were hittin alot harder than ya comp nice battle 4rm both of ya but my vote go 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~D~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
hate vote...next...i need some real votes ...3-1 im up
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