schema vs. String9487
 

10-12 bars
no noob votes 100 posts or more
no hate-crew-d/r votes
blind spit
no time limit just dont take all night

damn son i dont even know if i got 100 posts myself lol

dont worry about it i forgot to set it up...noob votes for everyone

:shoot: :shoot:

its about to get ill in here....

son, dont get me started or im lickin a shot
its no trouble for me to put a chick in the spot
new whips is dropped, got the glistenin watch
2 clips is hot, put this bitch in a box
i might have to wreck ya frame up
put ya flow on a stairmaster homie, n step ya game up
if u let of 3 betta make sure 3 hit me
i'll pop back, make ya fitted do a 360
homie u worthless n beat
n u quiet wit guns, u not known for disturbin the peace
i dont care if u ridin wit thangs, drivin the range
i'll still blow ya SCHEMA out the side of ya brain
u'll b in the corner hidin in pain
when my malicious flow cut n b dividen ya frame
u a bitch wit maternal tendicies, u made verbal enemies
ya whole fam b at the church trynna word they empathies
get ya weight, u a 22 im a 4-5
u not up to my caliber get it? dont try
u gotta respect, that the kid is nice, dipped in ice
built up my biceps from liftin mics
im tha nicest in the game, u cant see me playa
and the only "clips" that u got is in ya cd player
u got twisted, there aint been no luv
schema will get toasted like a quiznoe's sub.. HAAAAA :shoot: :shoot:

i dont usually battle noobs but ones about to get clapped
hadnt seen him till i peeped his 50 thousand posts on bitch slapped

you pretty confident for someone that flows as herb as you
but if youre so damn good then how come i aint heard of you

you know dudes a 'i live in my moms basement' rapper
ill leave this string twisted up worse then a jacobs ladder

always talkin bout guns...all he can do is basic rappin
aint got no heat but his boy the smiley face is packin

youre all gangster in ya rhymes but you shouldnt try and bring that out
cause on the real i bet a cat could prolly bat this string around

so warning...string is in the building...hes hazardous to real
herb you put me to sleep so ima call you chamomile

your wacker then hell..and yo im talkin the place
cause id prolly get set on fire 'fore i copped this kids tape

this cat just talks about him...his gun his chain his blouse his town
take that shit to open mic...its like three houses down

your in a battle now so get ya head down in the game
you couldnt even find a personal that clowned on my name

much as you try to hide it you still come across a yungun fam
everyone knows strings dont shoot...you aint no rubber band

^^uppin for votes^^

^^uppin for votes^^

Vote- Schema..... String def new 2 this shit.. battlein aint about gunz money or bitchez.. its about flowin n maken ya opponent look bad.. no expla need for suttin like this....

V- Schema.. peace

Peep n vote fairly on this..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850

damn quite easy one to choose here

Punches...schema
Flow....schema
Multis....niether
Wordplay...schema
Metas...schema
Personals.....Schema
Feelin....schema

Both came with it...but Schema just brung alot more.....with more direct punches....
vocab was aiight...and wrdplay was nice.....

Vote

Schema

return the favor on me and puertoricanelly's battle please thansk

chose winners verse:

i dont usually battle noobs but ones about to get clapped
hadnt seen him till i peeped his 50 thousand posts on bitch slapped
-finally a personal....opener=7/10
you pretty confident for someone that flows as herb as you
but if youre so damn good then how come i aint heard of you
-decent punch, but played
you know dudes a 'i live in my moms basement' rapper
ill leave this string twisted up worse then a jacobs ladder
-not easily understood, use basic info....
always talkin bout guns...all he can do is basic rappin
aint got no heat but his boy the smiley face is packin
-true, lacked structure and wordplay...
youre all gangster in ya rhymes but you shouldnt try and bring that out
cause on the real i bet a cat could prolly bat this string around
-nice punch, good personal...wordplay and structure=good, needs vocab.
so warning...string is in the building...hes hazardous to real
herb you put me to sleep so ima call you chamomile
-not easily understood, use basic info....
your wacker then hell..and yo im talkin the place
cause id prolly get set on fire 'fore i copped this kids tape
-sounds too soft. look for more expanion on the meaning
this cat just talks about him...his gun his chain his blouse his town
take that shit to open mic...its like three houses down
-great comedy line, vote= best line of the battle
your in a battle now so get ya head down in the game
you couldnt even find a personal that clowned on my name
-true, he had no personals. "inner sway"
much as you try to hide it you still come across a yungun fam
everyone knows strings dont shoot...you aint no rubber band
-haha, good wordplay and nice structure to create a good personal...closure=8/10


explanations:

STRING had no personals, he just talked about gangs and street slang, had multis but nothing impressive.....

SCHEMA had great punches, nice flow, all around 7/10 (impressive) verse...


vote: schema

return the favor...battled the same person

yo thanks for the votes ^^uppin this shit^^

^^uppin for votes^^

My vote goin to String.. Yeah schema had punchlines but they just didn't jump out at me. But yo, just cuz someone rap gangsta don't mean its not hott you haters

string didnt even come at all....talkin bout gun moneys n hoes..and this is a rap battle 4b2h....you gotta come with punches..not rap off bout somin no one cares about, schema came harder wit a better structure and flow

V/Schema, return the favor agains DJulien in the sig

Schema took it handz down.
Punches-schema
Flow-schema
Wordplay-schema
Metas-schema
Personals-schema
vote-schema
(vote me vs. Jacket)