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RapMisstress 07-22-04 12:05 PM

RapMisstress Vs. Murda Gram
 
10-20 lines

Don't matter who drops first

murda-gram 07-22-04 12:32 PM

These Two Guns//
Make Hoes Like U Run//
16 In A Clip And They All Hit U Weather Its Close Range Or Far Away Shit Dont Matta To Me But Nigas Like Me Dont Miss//
Casue Ma Shots Like Lips And U Just Got Kissed//
Aww Dam U Lost Already I Know How U Feel //
Cause I'm Throwin Knock Out Punches Like A George Foreman Grill//
I Got Bricks And Bricks Of Shit That Make Mugs Like Follow The Yellow Brick Road //
Dam Fuck I'm Pissed Switched In To Battle Moad //
You Like Vanilla Ice U A One Hit Wonda //
Like George Bush Fuckin With Me Is Yo Worst Military Blunda //
U The Type That Bust Down In Movies And Cars//
Same Bitch That Walked In The Hood With Sars//
Tryin To Battle Me U Must Not Be Respected //
Battlin Me Is Like Havein Sex Unprotected //
Nine Months Lata Watch Pop Out Thought It Was Yo Son But Its Me With Tha Desert Eagles //
Killin You And Yo Peoples//

murda-gram 07-22-04 12:32 PM

These Two Guns//
Make Hoes Like U Run//
16 In A Clip And They All Hit U Weather Its Close Range Or Far Away Shit Dont Matta To Me But Nigas Like Me Dont Miss//
Casue Ma Shots Like Lips And U Just Got Kissed//
Aww Dam U Lost Already I Know How U Feel //
Cause I'm Throwin Knock Out Punches Like A George Foreman Grill//
I Got Bricks And Bricks Of Shit That Make Mugs Like Follow The Yellow Brick Road //
Dam Fuck I'm Pissed Switched In To Battle Moad //
You Like Vanilla Ice U A One Hit Wonda //
Like George Bush Fuckin With Me Is Yo Worst Military Blunda //
U The Type That Bust Down In Movies And Cars//
Same Bitch That Walked In The Hood With Sars//
Tryin To Battle Me U Must Not Be Respected //
Battlin Me Is Like Havein Sex Unprotected //
Nine Months Lata Watch Pop Out Thought It Was Yo Son But Its Me With Tha Desert Eagles //
Killin You And Yo Peoples//

murda-gram 07-22-04 12:33 PM

Dam Ma Fault I Put Tha Same Shit Twice Good Luck Tho Hope Muthafuckas Actually Vote

RapMisstress 07-22-04 12:47 PM

This bitch got heat and I ain't afraid ta use it
I'm MURDERIN' GRAMS my lyrics seepin through his fluids
You're not on my level so don't even contest
Nigga this ain't a talent show ain't no amateurs in tha west
I bet ya neva seen a bitch that can rip ya whole man-hood
Nigga i'll bend ya ass ova put on a strap and beat it up good
I bet ya like it, cuz you seem like u flamin
With those silly ass flows, is it GAY PRIDE that you're claimin'?
Please, did you think I was gon' back down?
Go to tha start menu, choose shut down cuz its a wrap now

RapMisstress 07-22-04 12:48 PM

Aiight good shit Murda lets get it started yall, vote

RapMisstress 07-22-04 01:19 PM

yall sleepin give us some feed back pleaseeeeeeeeeee

Kizza 07-22-04 01:23 PM

yo Misstress you came hard wit a nice tight flow and hard hittin punches. ok personal.


murda ya flow was way stretched and you have a lotta spelling mistakes that make it hard to follow. you could improve ya vocam a tad as well.

vote: RapMisstress

return da fava ya'll

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136598

thanks.

~Luciano~ 07-22-04 02:24 PM

come on mistresss cum check in

Ice Pick 07-22-04 02:27 PM

Murda had some good personals, good wordplay and flow, a few good punches


Other cat didnt really have a good flow or any outstanding lines that i saw

Vote murda mistress


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136338

Keith Moon 07-23-04 01:19 PM

Rap had nice flow. nice structure. ok vocab/punches. okay personals but Murda was talkin about killin an stuff thats not rap battles man.....Get this fake e-net thug shit outta ur head and learn to use personals and disses......you had no flow at all or ya structure wasnt good eitehr

v/ Rap Mistresss

p.s. lemme just geta peek lmao....

The Reaper 07-23-04 01:58 PM

rap dominated. She at least had a structure, a good flow, some punches (good ones at that), some good personals, and actual rhymes.

murda, you had none of that. Try, try again.

v/ Rap Misstress

fluidmoon 07-23-04 02:12 PM

ok:this was really no compettition here:
murda: ya flow and structure was all over the place, no personals really or hard punches at that, keep workin on this shit tho......
RapMistress:ya had the harder verse here with good flow and strructure, nice disses and punches,personals, overall an all around good verse....
VOTE:RAPMISTRESS


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