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versitile 07-22-04 03:38 PM

different point of view
 
image of a thug many have copied,
none of which is original,
why be someone else,
struggling survival, trivial.
courage to admit fear,
first must realize,
as every other year,
eyes closed wide.
they say truth is free,
so many twisted,
foolish to see,
hesitant to risk it.
the system they hate,
unknowingly support,
each and every time,
responsibility finds abort.
gather intellec for defense,
knowledge cannot be taken,
must take action,
cracked is our foundation.
this is change,
difficult no doubt,
may seem strange,
untaken route,
thoughts and wisdom,
practiced and experienced,
struggles to achieve,
true and faithful perserverance.

SONIC 07-22-04 04:13 PM

Horrible Stucture..
Nice Topic
Good Content
mediocre rhymes

it's coo if it was freestyled..

but one question... WHY THE FUCK DID U POST THE SHIT THREE TIMES?


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