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Golden shellz vs. Kool col-b
no rush verses due 2morrow 8:30
10 lines no dr no hate no crew |
i dont no wut time it iz there, so ima put mine now.
U aint ready 4 wen k to da o and tha O AND L’S/ (it spells kool) i'm gonna do tha first half of my name 2 u, GOLDEN SHELLZ/ (kool in half=ko) but fuck it, im gonna give this NEWBIE A CHANCE/ even tho this bitch iz mo fake than BOOBY IMPLANTS/ us battelin, fo me, iz gonna EQUAL WINS/ tha best Kept secret, isnt LETHAL SINS/ (read hiz sig) it’s prolly either kool col-b, or OSAMA’S CAVE/ ur at my mama’s house, well I’m at YO MAMA’S GRAVE/ (read hiz location) I’m fuckin her corpse, and then I’m SLITTIN HER THROAT/ kool col-b muthaphukkaz, now im GITTIN UR VOTE/ werd |
u mean nada to me so dog u betta check it
ill killed ya crew thats why its called wac trac records( profile) u sayin that im faker den booby implants u got as much chance in winnin as ron jeremy pullin up his pants(ron=porn star) u got way too much glory nigga calm dat down u hittin corpses thats gay in my town i think kool col-b here should retire i bet he was ice cold till i burned him wit my fire if this was football den i intercepted ya pass coke, flip ,revoke i jus killed this niggas ass |
First Golden Dont Feed Off A Verse Its Kinda Weak... Dont Put What You Mean At The End Of A Line Do It After You Finish Your Verse It Messes Up Yo Strcture U aint ready 4 wen k to da o and tha O AND L’S/ (it spells kool) i'm gonna do tha first half of my name 2 u, GOLDEN SHELLZ Waste Of A First Line Go At Your Opponent That Whole Time Why Spell Your Name And Waste A Line Golden Shells You had personals But No Punces but fuck it, im gonna give this NEWBIE A CHANCE/ even tho this bitch iz mo fake than BOOBY IMPLANTS Wasted 1st Line Couldve Done Rap Game?Vanillia Ice A Even ay You Have No Chance... even tho this bitch iz mo fake than BOOBY IMPLANTS.... Not The Best But Couldve Done Suttin Creative ^^ Winner-Kool Because Golden Fed Off His Verse And That Was Played |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin here even tho that was a tru vote it was gay i jus feed a lil c'mon dont let dat fuck up a hot verse
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Vote/Kool
Was feelin both. errthing was straight but i was feelin Kool's flow more.Both was aiight but didnt come hard enough. return tha favor me VS. Ice Pick |
kool got at u wit that punches. and dont ride tha otha homies battle dawg thats pussy
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vote on da prodigy vs mixtape and i'll return the favor
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my vote go to golden shellz. his rhymes were official. kool u need to get a better format.
vote- shellz |
Kool Col-B - Ummm First Line.... Bad... Didnt Have Any Hard Punches Throughout Verse.... You Wanna Focus On Dissing Him, Makeing Him Look Bad And That Winz Punches, Flow Wasnt Good Niether, First 2 Linez Didnt Rhyme At All.... Structure Was Ok If You Made Harder Punches And Changed Your Self Glorification To A Witty Diss... Just Some Tips To Help Ya Out... Anyway Overal Not To Good....
Golden Shellz- Pretty Much Getz Every Aspect...Punches Were There, Flow Was Decent And Structure Was Ok..... Overal Decent Verse Punches- Golden Shellz Flow- Golden Shellz Metaz- Niether Multis- Niether Structure Golden Shellz Originality- Golden Shellz Personals- Niether Final Vote------ Golden Shellz Return Favor N Vote Fairly... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169 |
i guess it depends on how u say tha first bar. i try 2 focus on comples rymes cuz i think they mo important, not punchlines, so thats y i usually dont have much punchlines. werd
uppin!!!! |
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