spinn vs hattrick
 

same as in the callouts.u go first

na na.............i'ma go......

lmao..

if i've done sumth'n wrong..tell me cuz this is muh first battle.....




sayin' "HATs" a bitch, shows his true "indendty" //
even wit lead poisonin', you couldn't put a "pen-to-me" //

i'm leavin’ a "TRICC"in his style, damn take that bacc//
If that was the truth, then I'd be known as whacc //

i’ll have ya body leakin’ by a one tree hill //
but after this battle "hattrick" will be down for the kill //

give ya 9 & 4/5 seconds to escape my verbal steel // (9 & 4/5th’s=GUNS)
if you ain’t "folk", then you don’t know the deal //

time ain’t an concern, but prepare from your "death issue" //
I already buried ya lyrically, look no one missed you" //

ya up son

damn, ya bars were simple as numerics in hysterics.. just plain generic, but now your fucking with a esoteric so ya cheap dirt rhymes, its time to air it...
it may be hard, but realize that im not feeding your meaning, seeing how ya shits dirt im seeing and believing in cleaning...
Making ya rhymes like ya Balls...complete sterile so in peryl, ill drown ya-make ya the anchor man like will Ferral...
Oh an another thing your "SYMBOLS" dog where just "SIMPLE", ya need to work on your punches a little...
Oops damn didnt mean to act like a critic, im tired of punches with the one-hit shit, im going thru a fit bitch, your punches, you just cant hit wit...
I already knew you werent about shit, I can tell ya gay by your crew, ya outfit shouts it, come after me? i doubt it...
Damn sorry i made you go and spit first, now all these posters will realse ya shits worse-first, so now that i went and siftend thru dirt, i ready to take on my next battle ittl be hattrick vs. the rest of earth....


(sorry for the late reply i had work)

upppin for some votes.........................................

Hattrick came harder than spinn. Flow was tight and punches was good.spinn you did ok for your 1st battle though...Hattrick took it hands down.
V/Hattrick

upinnnnnnnnn for votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

good first battle dog~~but not to be mean or anything hiz first like took your verse to me~~i know its ur first battle and everything but u got to come harder than that~~stay up 1

vote goes to Hat

return da favor erry 1~~
Me verse blood hound
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137110

Vote To Hattrick
 

Both Need Work But Hatt Had More To Offer.more Quantity And Better Quality.

Vote=hattrick

Spinn your structure was aight and your verse was simple but got the point across remember sometimes simple is sweet, your vocab needs upped fah sho but that comes with time, aight vese.

Hattrick you came on point i liked your verse cause of the complexity of your vocab killah mane fah sho and you had good flow an all around good verse not much negative could've hit the personals bettah...

Both stay up Vote Hattrick

Spinn eh i answered you bitchslap you wanna go 8-12 lines pm me i'll set it up...

SPIn; aight structure and flow was easy but too simple, u do need to enhance ya punches being serious!

Hattrick: u came harder, nice flow overall.. structure was aight too.. You had good personal when u mentioned her need to work on his punches..

My Vote/ Hattrick

y'all stay up aight
~wun~