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puertoricanelly vs Tekniks

8 lines
no hate
no crew
no feeding
no dickrydin
must explain to vote
due 20 minutes after check in
you spit first
ones

chekin in..........................................

im like jadakiss asking "why" rb lettin wack rappas on this site?
then i see ur Screenname n be like sean paul sayn sum1 give u sum light,
so i can show u that rappin gainst me will have you like Kanye west, Beggin for jesus,
cuz i write sum lyrics that the whole crowd is pleased with.
and like ur sig my rhymes leave you "ILL AT ALL TIME",
and like ludakris you need to recognize these danga Signs
that confront you when u step on rb
u think u big on the streets but im makin real shit on Tv.

puertoricanelly

Your Dumpin Clips...Like indoors your just LACKIN wins Bitch
Stick 9 Gats to my 11 ribs and you still end up with a TRAGIC MISS~/~

just blastin chins....TEk releases WARRANTS when i DEliver DEATh HITTIn
i leave Rican HOLDING dead wieght Like over WORKED mortitions~/~

the First battle of MANY...TEK attacks emcees like sars when he spit....
Your sig says your WACK as FUCk and your Verse just finally PROVEd it~/~

So take ya Words Backspace HOLD and delete ya Verse and FATE.....
you couldn't SLIDE a win in this battle with KY when ya MASTERBATE~/~

aiight aiight UPPIN this shit

Commentz.... Teknikz... try to make ya flow come more together..... and puerto... think of punches to throw in wit ya metaz....

Punches: Not much from either side
Flow: Puerto
Metaz: Puerto
Originality: Tie
Structure: Tek
Wordplay: Tek

Vote- Puerto

lmfao.....lol aiight 1-0 i guess.....not really explained well but aiight...i give you that one...ONEZ

Quote:

Originally Posted by puertoricanelly

im like jadakiss asking "why" rb lettin wack rappas on this site?
then i see ur Screenname n be like sean paul sayn sum1 give u sum light,

3/5 Why is being used alot now, lettin rappaz in a site as well... weak punch But You Get Tha Metaphor

so i can show u that rappin gainst me will have you like Kanye west, Beggin for jesus,
cuz i write sum lyrics that the whole crowd is pleased with.

3/5 Metphor, Original... ok line

and like ur sig my rhymes leave you "ILL AT ALL TIME",
and like ludakris you need to recognize these danga Signs

3/5 Playing Out Rapper Relate Lines But ok

that confront you when u step on rb
u think u big on the streets but im makin real shit on Tv.

2/5 Weak Finisher..... no big punch
Overal 11/20

Quote:

Originally Posted by ||TekNEks||

Your Dumpin Clips...Like indoors your just LACKIN wins Bitch
Stick 9 Gats to my 11 ribs and you still end up with a TRAGIC MISS~/~

2/5 No Big Punch, didnt Flow Well

just blastin chins....TEk releases WARRANTS when i DEliver DEATh HITTIn
i leave Rican HOLDING dead wieght Like over WORKED mortitions~/~

3/5 Metaphor Still Flow Is Choppy

the First battle of MANY...TEK attacks emcees like sars when he spit....
Your sig says your WACK as FUCk and your Verse just finally PROVEd it~/~

3/5 Better Flow Ok Punch

So take ya Words Backspace HOLD and delete ya Verse and FATE.....
you couldn't SLIDE a win in this battle with KY when ya MASTERBATE~/~

2/5 Masterbate Lines Are Played, Not Very Hard Punch

Final 10/20

Puerto Winz Via 11/20 Compared To Teknes 10/20....

Peace

I think TekNEks came harder in this. His punches hit harder than puerto's. Puerto did have better meta's, but a battle is about punches, not metas, so my vote goes to TekNEks.

2-1........him...its all good though...punches do make battles....ONEZ

ayy tekneks im supposedly winnin but you beatin me 0-1 LOL i ono man these niggaz dont kno how to finish votes or to explain um UPPIN 2

i know mayne its all good though.......Punches when battles....iono.....this place has changed....lol.....its all go though g'luck mayne

Tekneks gets it because he had a good flow with nice multis and punches. I wasnt really feelin ricans verse. Some lines were kinda stretched too. Tekneks wins this with a good structure, flow, multis, and punches.

Vote-Tekneks

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