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AutoMATIK™ vs MC_SYX
5barz
Verses Due 30min after check i'll spit when u check ... |
:shoot: Alright let me get to dissin this guy, cus once i start to spit its bout to be submission time,
He calls himself automatic but he's still in manual, It's bout to get climatic eat like a cannibal, Ok enough small talk i'll get straight to the matter, have you outlined i chalk and have whole crew scatter, Listen closely, you aint got reason to boast b, this dudes right hand is only fuckin homie, Oh I'm sorry did I offend you in a way, I really don't care cus i say what i wanna say, This guy really thinks he got me KO'd, nobody takes you seroius dude your just a fuckin joke |
ok,i'll drop in 10 ...
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I spit plenty punches to pierce thru your brains with .speed. …
while dismantle your mantle with blazin rhymes until your neck drips with gasoline. … My raps style drastic leavin niggas buried and wrapped up in.plasti. … Wit spit taktikz that’ll chop you up like cabbage and leave you turned over in caskets I'll slay my punches to his brain wit verbs that'll leave em drippin in sweat. ... Rippin organs and spittin verses thru his spine until each word is .rippin his neck. ... Why even spit ?Your time is now to feel the pressure of a lyrical king at his best. .... One Versesend three shells thru ur vest and damage each splein thru your chest . ... I'll.scorch your team. and drag them acorss the patio until the porch is clean ... i dont result to verbal violence i just chop up your bars wit claws like wolverine. ... That’s 4 barz.No need for a last bar … uppin for votes … |
Aight, honestly, I think both of you could have came harder.. Syx, your structure was pretty weak.. It's not often that bars are labled too short, but yours were.. and because of that, your punches weren't able to hit very hard.. you tried to hit on his crew, and I don't think he even has a crew.. make sure your punches HIT the person you're battling.. Auto, instead of lines being too short, I think yours were a little bit stretched, which resulted in choppy flow in certain places.. Your punches, I feel, could have also hit harder.. but there were a couple decent ones that landed you my vote.. you also had a couple decent multis that helped immensely on making my decision.. you both show potential, keep droppin' the fire.. much respect..
v/Auto |
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MC_SYX check your pms.
That is all. I'll probably vote later. |
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zzzzzzzz
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Syx your verse was aight didn't come with as much content as auto, structure was messed but all the same your punches just were not hittin like auto. it became apparent that you ain't on autos level YET (keep elevatin) and he came hard with vocab and punches and a decent verse. flow was aight for both...Vote auto
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flow: automatic cuz it ran outta my toung alot smother and better
punches: automatic cuz it was way more hard hitting more creative and slick and more ugly N ruthless which is good.. diss: automatic cuz he made me laugh and the diss was preety good as-well... vote: automatic.... |
Punches: Automatic
Flow: Automatic Structure: Tie Creativity: Automatic Multis: Neither nice battle, i think both of you could have come harder but in the end Automatic takes this one. v Automatic peace |
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Punches- Tie
Flow- Syx Multis- Niether Structure- Automatik Originality- Tie Vocab- Automatik Metaphors- Tie Wordplay- Niether Final Vote Automatik... overall better verse... ok battle.. peace peep my battle n vote fair... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 |
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