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AutoMATIK™ vs intensify effect
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Punchline Battle. Due in 15minutes. I'll Drop when you check up ... Good Luck |
no dout then this is my check.............................
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this should take 5min ... imma drop in a few
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Stupid! its ova Now read it & weep
cuz Golden Gate aint got nothin' on the Bridgework u gonna need for ya teeth. idk good luck |
ummmmmmm,
im waitting............................ |
another DQ aka no-show.....
and on-top of that u was saying this should take 5 min...... ahhhhh i need someone who will actully show.... |
Got punches from every 'Angle-Waitin' with a 'Painful-Statment'
This battle is your Appointment' thats why I 'Strangle-Patients',watch as I DROP effect like a pair of 'Tangled-Laces' quick little bar,uppin for votes |
my bad,i had a tournament battle to write for ... i dont no show stupid ...
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Got punches from every 'Angle-Waitin' with a 'Painful-Statment'
This battle is your Appointment' thats why I 'Strangle-Patients',watch as I DROP effect like a pair of 'Tangled-Laces' hot verse auto i was feelin the structure and the' ' nice vocab and you got like 4 punches in one swing good shit Stupid! its ova Now read it & weep cuz Golden Gate aint got nothin' on the Bridgework u gonna need for ya teeth. i like wha u said about the bridgework but ya structure was stretched be more complexity my vote iz Auto |
This is kinda tough, do i go for short and to the point or stretched complex structure?
hmmmm, well both did good here and intensify's punch was funny, auto, yours was a little long, but good. ok, i have to make a decision, i'ma say intensify, your shit made me laugh..............but you both are good, i can see this goin both ways....alll love 1. vote:intensify |
Auto = Your Lines Were Hott Shit. i Like The 4 Punches In It.
Intense = You Line Was Pretty Hott. If You Think About It You Had A Pretty Nice Punch. A Little Too Wordy i Think Auto Took The Battle Cause He Had 4 Punches And Pretty Tight Rhymes vote = Auto |
Intensify Had Bad Struc' on tha punch.. but it was funny n to the point.... autoz was a lil stretched but hit just as hard.... Ima go Wit Auto.....
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ok ok ... uppin for more
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Intensify took this easy. Autos wasnt really directed towards intensify so his wasnt that good of a punch. His line was also stretched. Intensify takes this with the harder punch and simple structure.
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