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Atticus vs DaTruth29
Lines:20-30 No Hate Votes No Dickriding No Crew Votes No Recycling Deadline:Midnight Tonight Topic:"Laying In Bed" (Expand...) |
I exhale, my gassed chest astrally Delivers Me
I rest, dwell different dimensional peaks, i've now Left my Enimies Caught in a "Circle" of time, with no Eccentricity I dream, no upriise, I lie in Bed for Extra Energy Ripped Sheets from doing Big Things wit Thick Freaks Last Night Tipsy from Remmy, wit a chick grabbin my ass firm like Black Tights I hit the weed, gazing at a spinning cieling from Cold Angles Stationed like men wit Broke Ankles, laid out like Snow angles 8 hours of sleep, yet I need rest, give me 11 More Thoughts will soon be on point enough to Sever Swords And out of the 7 dwarfs, Sleepy had to be the most Content I Sterilize tanted dreams, as the Celestial ambit's my Only Vent I'm so lazy that I have a toilet next to my Bed So I can still lay down, instead of getting up i turn n piss laterally Instead I'm sleep, no Actually I'm Dead, I couldn't leave the matress if i Wanted To But it's Nothin New, I'm stuck to U like some old Gum I chewed Every Day I play this game of life n death, every time I Hardley Win I'm so used to bein comfortable that I can play a BasketBall game in R.E.M This is no Obstical, I can "FREESTYLE" a Topical,"lyin in bed" in the Hospital I Got The Flow, So I always tuck my Note Book in at 9 Oclock Fasho A loyal friend of the Cousin Of Death, we stay together like a Land Mass Still in bed coz a couple of nights ago I went to the beach wit the Sand Man No Dirty rhymes, I rise as an Emerging Mind, talkin bout lying down, in 30 lines So I lie down 30 Lines, I lie so much, I have a Curving Spine Shit, the lazy "Lyin" King, yet I fit in this Garfield Society Technology has allowed us all to be useless now, Finally Years of Fears from Peirs, The reaper's here, I Hear him Clear wit Ears Shot out to my niggas lying in bed with in Prison Tiers For u I cry Prison Tears, don't fret, Listen Here, the End is Near For I lie in bed for ya'll, my hopes n dreams Live in There...... But one day I won't even awake in bed, my world shall soon Dissapear FUCK MIDNIGHT.. I FREESTYLE.. HERE YOU GO.. |
I lay there and pray my health fairs wont leave me with pay-ments, more of health aids care
Everday I sustain fair times, lieing there with my tupea of make-shift kinds of fake hairs People stair as they see these bold kids lieing there in critical as I tear the cross off my easle See you'll hear my wishes but fear my disease woll leave you stricken, needing the same kind of kemo Wake up but should just take up a look at how I could just simply unhook eight plugs And take a look into the great above instead of just putting up, I've took pain enough Hospital beds should not be prac-tical to a kid, god why is this a possible blend It's impossible to mend all the pain I've obtained threw so few years of optical ends Cold sheets benieth my cold feet, I'm so old in mind cuz I have but a few short weaks Bold speach spoke with such ease because all these words meat new loves to absorb all means Bedtime, shit my bed cries even when I'm put back with back down as if knowing it's the end line Lend my eyes to cetch signs of life across the room, cuz I assume I may never agian find them flyn' by Think and wonder, all I can drink is water cuz my system can't filter any thing other Many kids n' new comers in and out lendeeng there support to this sick strick wonder Amazed I'm alive cuz so many days I thought I'd died, but really not alive when ina bed for days ata time Phased by the time, your only as strong as the kind of brawn that is placed in your mind Seaching for comfort beyond the white polyuathin covers and the morning covers Learning I'm unfortch-unately forced to support these doctors with bills, steady serving these papers I've got no future except for the docs main user of beds and legal narcot-it usage I pop these tranques and eat my meals,"Sir I feel good, PLEASE can I get off this doomed bed |
Okay-kkk
NiCe Battle Attictus- You Stretched Your Lines Far But It Was A Nice Drop Throughout.... DaTruth- Also NiCe Drop feelin Your Verse Very Descent.... Open- I exhale, my gassed chest astrally Delivers Me I rest, dwell different dimensional peaks, i've now Left my Enimies 9/10..Ratio Nice From: The Pen's Gennesis Status: Online IP: A001 97D8 I lay there and pray my health fairs wont leave me with pay-ments, more of health aids care Everday I sustain fair times, lieing there with my tupea of make-shift kinds of fake hairs Wouldve Been bigger If Not Stretched 9/10 Closer- For I lie in bed for ya'll, my hopes n dreams Live in There...... But one day I won't even awake in bed, my world shall soon Dissapear Not Off Topic But No On Track really 8/10 I've got no future except for the docs main user of beds and legal narcot-it usage I pop these tranques and eat my meals,"Sir I feel good, PLEASE can I get off this doomed bed 9/10 NiCe Winner Attictus |
I can respect that^ considering that this was my first ever topical battle, i didn't even know they existed.. lol
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plus yo scoring is kinda wierd... it's all good tho, i should have an opening for a freestyle battle tomorrow, so it's curtains...
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Stop Freeposting You Bitch... Put Your Comments Into One Post Not Two... |
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yo you 2 niggas did yall i cant even vote it wouldnt be fair yall both got buck.good shit ill vote on another battle but this one is toooooo hard to pick.
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is that right^.. i'm flattered then, this is supposed to be his specialty..
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