Atticus vs DaTruth29
 

I exhale, my gassed chest astrally Delivers Me
I rest, dwell different dimensional peaks, i've now Left my Enimies
Caught in a "Circle" of time, with no Eccentricity
I dream, no upriise, I lie in Bed for Extra Energy
Ripped Sheets from doing Big Things wit Thick Freaks Last Night
Tipsy from Remmy, wit a chick grabbin my ass firm like Black Tights
I hit the weed, gazing at a spinning cieling from Cold Angles
Stationed like men wit Broke Ankles, laid out like Snow angles
8 hours of sleep, yet I need rest, give me 11 More
Thoughts will soon be on point enough to Sever Swords
And out of the 7 dwarfs, Sleepy had to be the most Content
I Sterilize tanted dreams, as the Celestial ambit's my Only Vent
I'm so lazy that I have a toilet next to my Bed
So I can still lay down, instead of getting up i turn n piss laterally Instead
I'm sleep, no Actually I'm Dead, I couldn't leave the matress if i Wanted To
But it's Nothin New, I'm stuck to U like some old Gum I chewed
Every Day I play this game of life n death, every time I Hardley Win
I'm so used to bein comfortable that I can play a BasketBall game in R.E.M
This is no Obstical, I can "FREESTYLE" a Topical,"lyin in bed" in the Hospital
I Got The Flow, So I always tuck my Note Book in at 9 Oclock Fasho
A loyal friend of the Cousin Of Death, we stay together like a Land Mass
Still in bed coz a couple of nights ago I went to the beach wit the Sand Man
No Dirty rhymes, I rise as an Emerging Mind, talkin bout lying down, in 30 lines
So I lie down 30 Lines, I lie so much, I have a Curving Spine
Shit, the lazy "Lyin" King, yet I fit in this Garfield Society
Technology has allowed us all to be useless now, Finally
Years of Fears from Peirs, The reaper's here, I Hear him Clear wit Ears
Shot out to my niggas lying in bed with in Prison Tiers
For u I cry Prison Tears, don't fret, Listen Here, the End is Near
For I lie in bed for ya'll, my hopes n dreams Live in There......
But one day I won't even awake in bed, my world shall soon Dissapear


FUCK MIDNIGHT.. I FREESTYLE.. HERE YOU GO..

I lay there and pray my health fairs wont leave me with pay-ments, more of health aids care
Everday I sustain fair times, lieing there with my tupea of make-shift kinds of fake hairs
People stair as they see these bold kids lieing there in critical as I tear the cross off my easle
See you'll hear my wishes but fear my disease woll leave you stricken, needing the same kind of kemo
Wake up but should just take up a look at how I could just simply unhook eight plugs
And take a look into the great above instead of just putting up, I've took pain enough
Hospital beds should not be prac-tical to a kid, god why is this a possible blend
It's impossible to mend all the pain I've obtained threw so few years of optical ends
Cold sheets benieth my cold feet, I'm so old in mind cuz I have but a few short weaks
Bold speach spoke with such ease because all these words meat new loves to absorb all means
Bedtime, shit my bed cries even when I'm put back with back down as if knowing it's the end line
Lend my eyes to cetch signs of life across the room, cuz I assume I may never agian find them flyn' by
Think and wonder, all I can drink is water cuz my system can't filter any thing other
Many kids n' new comers in and out lendeeng there support to this sick strick wonder
Amazed I'm alive cuz so many days I thought I'd died, but really not alive when ina bed for days ata time
Phased by the time, your only as strong as the kind of brawn that is placed in your mind
Seaching for comfort beyond the white polyuathin covers and the morning covers
Learning I'm unfortch-unately forced to support these doctors with bills, steady serving these papers
I've got no future except for the docs main user of beds and legal narcot-it usage
I pop these tranques and eat my meals,"Sir I feel good, PLEASE can I get off this doomed bed

Okay-kkk

NiCe Battle

Attictus- You Stretched Your Lines Far But It Was A Nice Drop Throughout....
DaTruth- Also NiCe Drop feelin Your Verse Very Descent....

Open-

I exhale, my gassed chest astrally Delivers Me
I rest, dwell different dimensional peaks, i've now Left my Enimies

9/10..Ratio Nice




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I lay there and pray my health fairs wont leave me with pay-ments, more of health aids care
Everday I sustain fair times, lieing there with my tupea of make-shift kinds of fake hairs

Wouldve Been bigger If Not Stretched 9/10

Closer-

For I lie in bed for ya'll, my hopes n dreams Live in There......
But one day I won't even awake in bed, my world shall soon Dissapear

Not Off Topic But No On Track really 8/10

I've got no future except for the docs main user of beds and legal narcot-it usage
I pop these tranques and eat my meals,"Sir I feel good, PLEASE can I get off this doomed bed

9/10 NiCe

Winner Attictus

I can respect that^ considering that this was my first ever topical battle, i didn't even know they existed.. lol

plus yo scoring is kinda wierd... it's all good tho, i should have an opening for a freestyle battle tomorrow, so it's curtains...

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^^^...
Stop Freeposting You Bitch...
Put Your Comments Into One Post Not Two...

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yo you 2 niggas did yall i cant even vote it wouldnt be fair yall both got buck.good shit ill vote on another battle but this one is toooooo hard to pick.

is that right^.. i'm flattered then, this is supposed to be his specialty..

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