Deeper than the Ocean
 

Deeper than the ocean, hopin', to keep my mind open
I get a feeling like sinking subs sometimes when I try to coping
eloping, from my mindstate to get deeper in my rhymescape
I open the drapes, to reveal my luscious landscape
citizens congregate as I paint a dreamscape
upon this board with my voracious palate

It gets immensly deep when I sleep
because nightmares haunt me
after I've prayed on my knees
dreams about disease, sickness, and police
wakin and screamin cause I fear capture and release

NOT TO BAD........really not all that great though....nice emotion...vocab was aiight...nothing to special....good flow at points...overall descent piece......onez

good stuff kept it up!

wuddup kizza i hear ur da leader of da b.a.m. crew its raw killa ruff i think said sumtin bout me good drop yo peep my shit n tell me wut u think keep postin holla back peace

this is wack and pointless

a lot of your grammar doesn't make any sense.. like you're just throwing in big words to sound clever. oh well, alright i guess. bit short.