gOLDEN SHELLZ VS dRACTACULar
 

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no crew/ dr/hatin
due wen finished

i like to rip and roar
i am hard to the core
i am the mc from hell
only my bullets can tell
how the shell from my shotty
takes ur mind from ur body
golden shellz is wack
like fucking full potty
u can be a kill bill
wit no ammo and no skillz

i put two gunz up stand back wen i fuckin spray
ak all day bring da mac ur way.
hes hattin golden shellz but hes a pussy to da game
if i kill this nigga golden will become an elevated name.
this nigga raps like a little boy wit lukemia disease
i regret in clickin "yes i wanna slaughter this emcee"
he says hes dractacular but hes not scary to me
hes about as scary as laura bush givin her pussy up 4 free.
as far as ya wack rap i got dat shit read
pay attention folks he sayin da shit his signature said!!

uppin for votes to close dis quickly. i dont hold out will return da favor

gloden shellz was mush betta cuz of betta flow betta structure and longer lines.
drac you were to god damn basic and that sucks around here.

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Another fuckin blow out..Golden Shellz had dis. Drac consider yourself...merked. All i can tell you is make your linez longer an stop usin dat basic shit. Come up wit some punchez or if not youd be better off not even rappin. Anyway jus elevate playa.
Flow-shellz
Structure-shellz(drac had dem ass short linez)
Wordplay-shellz(Drac had dat basic shit)
Personalz-shellz(drac none)
Punchez-shellz(do i have 2 explain)
v/Shellz

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i give dis to Dractacular because of structure and rhymes

give dis one to dractacular he jus had better rhymes in general