crazy freewrite
 

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raps,new artist is back,strapped 2 my ears wit pens n paper when my rhymes attack,continue goin like i got a energizer battery stuck in my back,exploitin da facts,dat half da writers here r whack,n got ghost writer's writin they tracks,but im in 4 da adreneline so keep yo platinum records n plaques/
words become puppets on strings when i manipulate da flow,like forks in da road,i fuck wit da boards like i stuck my dick in da floor,stick live wires in ya bellybutton 2 shock ya inner ambiligal cord,n cut off ya toes usin cutting boards,my rhymes slice through ya knuckles when ya punches meet my sword/i sucker punches,when i mix verbs n oxymorons n adjectives in poetic brunches,slit personality,n da ability 2 switch my flows u should peep my functions,strickly 4 da people who like playin wit buttons,this my lyrical technoligy,programmed like da best computer's 2 sweep da industy/
sumtin like da matrix,playin musical mind tricks,da 1 n e mic would worship,ya stats droppin like da stock market causin personal hardships,im bad luck so i recomend not bein da one u split polls wit,bottom line,b4 ur life ends up on flatline i suggest im da 1 u shouldnt fuck wit

c'mon people i kno ur readin post sum feedback give me yo opinion's peace out holla back uppin uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

your good killa i guess peeps dont see that.lol

thanx soultress89 for da reply yea people on here r 2 blinded by da hate of da fact i use nigga n niggaz in my lyrics n cant jus apprieciate i got skills keep postin ya shit u got sum skill 2 ma holla back c'mon people uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yeah your skilled with rhymes.

ayt people quit frontin like u aint got enough time 2 drop ur knowledge on a post quit skimmin through music drop a note short or hate or love i dont give a fuck jus say sumtin uppin 4 feedback peace holla back^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

U Suck This Sucks Ya Structure Is Wack Just Quit

seems like sum 1 has hit dat time of da month bitch quit hatin u aint ready 4 dis pussy da rest of ya'll thanx 4 da love holla back c'mon more feedback give me ur repsonse peace

it started out a lil slow in da beggining but it picked up....overall nice spit

It Sucked Raw Killa Dont Hate On Me Cause I'm Betta Quit Now Nuff Said

Yo Raw It Was Good Man Keep Doin Wah Chu Do Boss

virtue i aint quittin bitch n u or none of ur faggot hatin buddie gonna make i kno i got skillz many people said ya'll jus mad cuz sum 1 here who can amount 2 ya'll skill n hate it cuz im white fuckin moron's seriously u peeps droppin nursey rhymes quit frontin every1 else thanx 4 da feedback uppin 4 more holla back b.a.m. 4 life peace out 1 luv

At first I wasnt gettin ya flow, then I caught on/
A lot of nice punches and wordplay there man/
Multis could have been a little better, but still good/
But you had me confused til I got use to ya rhyme scheme/
break ya lines up more, it looks like a giant rhymin paragraph/
Good shit in it, juss a little hard to read thas all man/
Keep spittin man and keep elevatin I give it a 7.5/10 man/

thanx d.a. uppin 4 mo feedback...damn finally sum 1 smart on dis site peace out ^^^