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fluidmoon 07-23-04 09:28 PM

fluidmoon VS. str8_hood (TOPICAL)
 
25 line max
Verses Due by 1:00 am(unless u cant, get back to me)
NO HATE,D/R,OR CREW,VOTES
EXPLAINED VOTES ONLY
TOPIC:ADDICTION...........

fluidmoon 07-23-04 09:30 PM

ok, i'm checkin in now..............if u dont like the due time let me know.....but i prefer something tonight.............................

fluidmoon 07-24-04 01:49 AM

ok, heres my drop anyway, post yours whenever you can sooner than later.......preferably by sunday............................................ ........


Traveling through my veins is a beautiful stranger, an acquired affliction.....................
It is a piercing pain,yet soothing comfort in knowing this invasive attention.................
My body yearning,this feeling wont leave me, i need this magic tonic stress reliever.....
A forever faithful friend to me in dark and lonely times,its warmth made me a believer...
Full of false hopes and countless shameful lies, i take a deep long swig..................
Knowing it would clear my head if only for awhile, i dug myself a deeper ditch...........
All else fades into the black abyss known as the pit of my stomach.......................
I try to findwhat is left of my faith in love of myself, w/this alcohol gimmick................
The desire builds, i grow anxious each passing moment i dont have you near..............
Still i keep chasing vodka with beer, even the white rabbit would run in fear..............
The early grave i have discovered, all too late, not enough time to recover.................
Still i'm haunted by a curse, an affliction, this will be my death i'll soon discover.....
No turning back now for in my dreams even jesus holds a bottle, he mocks me..........
My eyes,ears, and mind were invaded with this parasite and i can never see..........
And although i look elsewhere, i''ll never find the answers to my questions.............
Of how i could let you escape me, true love of my life, my only Addiction.............

Desipher 07-24-04 01:50 AM

vote on da prodigy vs mixtape an i'll return the favor

fluidmoon 07-24-04 01:15 PM

just uppin this biatch so u see it................................................ .....................

Implicit 07-25-04 08:45 PM

o yah i think we should change tha topic cause i dont kno if u wrote that shit before or not


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