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Da Podigy vs Troubledinocense
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here it goes....
let me murder this guy wit quick raps/ ya punch lines hit soft callem bitchslaps// get back..cause ya style is backed up/ just by ya name i can tell that use a wack fuck// right now i can be runnin the game/bustin them thangs/ have u movin like that guy dancing under ya name// two more punches and i just might zone out/ two more punches and ill make ya mind blown out// whoa ya style went from "mint" to a ~mess~/ my punchlines hit hard till u see imprints on ya chest// i need somebody on my cock to run round wit/ but not you dawg cause ur ass is dumbfounded// now that i spit i hope u gon say shit/ my bars is bullets spit it under ya chin to give u a facelift...... i didnt see this so thats why i didnt respond... iight...holla back!!! |
yo/get uh grip ..ya style is fucked up 4 real...
u shouldnt be rappin u should be singin pop like pharrel... this guy has no talent..he needs ta prepare a little more... u dont wana rap..ya mom made ya do it 4 uh chore.. he has no rhythem cuz he comin 2 weak... cuz if he did he'd know he's already been "beat"... this guy is wack..theres no fuckin with the prod.. da punchlines hit ya chin..make ya whole head nod... just get it threw ya mind..u just got served.. when this battle is over u'll be servin me orderves... u could never be nothin..except pamperin ya pimp... cuz u cant lift uh "bar" cuz u buit lika wimp... he needs ta get more focused...he's still listenin 2 me go.. usin his pen and pad..takin notes on howta flow... |
one of my bars doesnt make sense cause he changed his avatar to make me look stupid (shook) scared.......whatever !!!!
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troubledinocense
here it goes.... let me murder this guy wit quick raps/ ya punch lines hit soft callem bitchslaps// ummm ...... get back..cause ya style is backed up/ just by ya name i can tell that use a wack fuck// ummmm..... right now i can be runnin the game/bustin them thangs/ have u movin like that guy dancing under ya name// he aint dancing hes spinning the turn-tables weak.... two more punches and i just might zone out/ two more punches and ill make ya mind blown out// weak... whoa ya style went from "mint" to a ~mess~/ my punchlines hit hard till u see imprints on ya chest// i see effort in this bar, its ok.. i need somebody on my cock to run round wit/ but not you dawg cause ur ass is dumbfounded// that was weak and dumb.... now that i spit i hope u gon say shit/ my bars is bullets spit it under ya chin to give u a facelift...... weak ending u could of hit harder all around.... this was basic and sorda lame in some parts dont take it personal just work on being more creative and hit harder... 5.0 Da Prodigy yo/get uh grip ..ya style is fucked up 4 real... u shouldnt be rappin u should be singin pop like pharrel... ok, this guy has no talent..he needs ta prepare a little more... u dont wana rap..ya mom made ya do it 4 uh chore.. weak... he has no rhythem cuz he comin 2 weak... cuz if he did he'd know he's already been "beat"... ummm.... this guy is wack..theres no fuckin with the prod.. da punchlines hit ya chin..make ya whole head nod... ok, just get it threw ya mind..u just got served.. when this battle is over u'll be servin me orderves... ok, u could never be nothin..except pamperin ya pimp... cuz u cant lift uh "bar" cuz u buit lika wimp... u tryed to be creative here i give u a E for effort... but try and reword that whole bar with the same idea and u could of hit harder... he needs ta get more focused...he's still listenin 2 me go.. usin his pen and pad..takin notes on howta flow... weak ending.. i saw u tryed to be creative in some areas but fall short on the hard hit but all around if u keep trying u can elevate dog... 6.0 outta 10 my vote: Da Prodigy |
oo can ya copy and past one of those links i have and vote in my battle...
thanks for return the favor of a vote..... |
uppin
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Punches-Tie Meta's-Prod Wordplay-Prod Complexity-Prod Structure-Prod Open/close-Prod/Trouble overall it was an ok battle but ive seen better from you both the punches were tied cuz they both were kinda soft could came alot harder Prod took my vote with the overall better structure and wordplay ~~~~~~~~my vote ~~~~~~~Prodigy~~~~~~~~~ |
ima have to give this battle to prodigy. his personals were better
troubled had good structure but he seemed troubled to come up wit some good punches so ima have to give it to prodigy both were pretty good tho v=prodigy please return the favor i need these closed!!! http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136648 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136404 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136610 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136344 |
uppin...2 more votes..i'll return the favor
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I am going to have to agree with J Troop on this battle/
Flow: Tie Punches: Tie Meats: Prod Multis: Prod Wordplay: Prod Complexity: Pord Structure: Prod Vote Prod Prod's whole fuckin verse overall better than yours man, sorry but its my opinion/ |
thanks 4 the votes....one more an this thing is closed
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wordplay.. prod
structure.. prod punches.. prod opener.. tie closer.. trouble i got to give tis vote to prod.. nice verse, but his flo was better and he hit a lil harder on the insults.. so i have to vote for prod.. retun the favor wit a vote in mines http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136085 |
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