Feelin in control (Can You Feel It) Feedback
 

Dont let anyone control your feelin-Cuz the feelin their providins just a temporary Lie/High-Who ever said it was great-What they consider great might determine yo fate-Sooner than later dont be a fuckin hater-fuck with me now and Ill deal with you later-Just cuz your miserable dont blame me- You shoul be thankful for this thearapys free- choke it down that pride you chew on- What was in the moonlight is not with the dawn- I got nothin but time so let me shine-I be feelin so fine like the world is mine-All I feel is the way I feel and always try to keep the feelin real-Hopin that you never steal- my sanity-Feelin alone a million miles away-Feelin the fear and still doin it anyway-smarter than a rocket built by a scientist-But still dumb enough to even wanna slit yo wrist-If I was you Id be pissed-Cuz they gave you fellins that didnt exist-Ya think ya woulda cut sideways thinkin straight-If ya wanna feel somethin Id feel Irate-Feel your own feelins raise ya own ceilins- but when it comes to business let the lawyer do the dealins-Dont get delt another bad hand-Cuz the only thing the hour glass holds is sand-Tickity tock I stole flava flavs clock-cookin up mcs like a japanesse wok-If ya wanna feel somethin then feel this beat-Youll feel iit in a second or on second street-The choice is yours ya gots open doors- ya can walk on two or get on all fours-ya only fuck yoself the choice is yours-----CAN YOU FEEL IT---CAN YOU FEEL IT----------

hm... kinda hard to read but alright i guess. subject's a bit uncreative but the rhymes are solid.