Trooper vs daillest1
 

10/15
no dr
no crew votes
no feedin
no re post
no bull shit


verses due 30 minz after check n

waitin on u 2 check in then i will

im checkin in~~vote on da battle between me and blood hound so we can get that closed out.......

check in verses due by 3

iight daz coo wit me~~vote on da battle yo~~lol gettin that shit ova wit~~

since u aint drop nuffin herez mine~~~
 

sought 2 daillest ?… HA, HA he’s such a silly man…
bout to pull out tha glock… BLAP, BLAP leave yo fuckin thoughts on tha ciling fan…
switch tha piece to tha other hand, n let tha metal stand, up in yo fuckin memory glands

AYO, I have this bitch runnin, like death is commin 4 ‘em…
HOMO talking shit… than tha fuckin coffin’s where I store ‘em…
Scorchin… scratches ta holes with blood pourin…
Decapitate, Gut-lacerate, n donate this fagots organs…
Bleep Ble-Bleep, that’s all folks… like I was porkin…(porky the pig)
Yea… Tha manz is morbid, cut yo fuckin body parts in proportions…
N leave this fagot skattered in caskets, like Tha Strukin was morgin…(A Mortician)

troop couldnt catch a flow if dis nigga had finz/
nigga ain sick dats just uncontrolable body functionz/

with perfect Percision.. the Feminin Illest 1 in my Rifle Vision
Multi shellz touch ya back harder than Law school Curriculum

Come to terms with the Reflection of your not gangster please get it
Trooper... will leave u like the old- Wizards roster all full of Bullets

1 you will never be took in as a Street Legend i got an Acurate Weapon
split you up in Sections with Perfection leave u on knees like a Reverend

Im Twisted, Dimented bring the most SIckest Illusiv Dimensions into Spittin
they'll be searchin for ya cranium,fingers, torso like Mtv road rule's Missions

Ya lyrical ability resembles Feecee's no real mc's come out of south east Dc
only takes 3 through ya jersey that'll have you takein dirt naps wit Eazy E

dont be Senseless coming into Verbal conflict or Lyrical collisions
ive seen ya record Translation youve been gettin tagged like Prince in Prison

knock ya thoughts from up under ya fitted No Reculection of what happend
more holes will touch ya Chest Cavity than tha Rings off of Phil Jackson

daillest1 got you, trooper you need to expand and try to ryhmes more words on the end of your bars so they hit harder.. And da illest1 you gotta work a little more on your punches but you still got it

-Return the favor on my other battles and be honest

~~thats straight....~~uppin for sum votes~~and vote on me verse blood hound~~tryin 2 get that closed out~

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137110

uppin 4 some votes

jtropper took dis battle, his punches were harder,(u could tell) dat he has experience, and daillest1 was not good, his punches were not even even grazin', u need sum practice, vote, jtrooper

flow: j-trooper i thought it was smother and was easyer to follow
punches: j-trooper i thought hit harder and was more effective with hes celever hits
diss: : tie cuz i couldnt decied who was funnyer i thought ya both did well here

vote: j-trooper i thought edge this battle out with flow and harder punches

also plez return the favor of a vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137050

Troop:

Personals: they were aight.
Punches: good
Wordplay: nice, but lacked in some areas
Creativity: you got a lot of
Vocab: this was one of your verse's best qualities.
Opener/CLosure: these were top noch, had good structure.

Daillest:

Personals: they were hittin pretty good.
Punches: solid
Worplay: you came with some good WP too
Creativity: i saw a lil more from J Troop
Vocab: you had few vocabulary, but strong
Opener/Closure: great opener, decent Closure.

vote: Trooper

return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137008

Daillest1- ya verse was decent i really didnt like it....your punches were decent too but some wernet straight fire...or didnt hit hard....your structure sucked i thought...your flow was aight but still elevate manye...
J Trooper- your verse was nice i thought....your punches were also good too...your structure was good too....so overall Trooper got this wit a better verse and punches...

v/J Trooper...